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11-21-05, 03:33 AM | #1 | |
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My Ambitions *NEW TRACK* Featuring Zone Out * Implicit
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My Ambitions
this is for the rv rap game I spit 1st. I do the hook. then its Implicit and he does the hook. enjoy this inspirational track from Myself and Implicit Im also an idiot. I had the track since friday, but when Implicit was sendin me the verse, I went to sleep, cos he got slow ass dial up I had forgot I had the damn thing, but Im seriously hopin thats its all good Apexx.
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11-21-05, 03:43 AM | #2 | |
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feedback
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2546539 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2546545
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11-21-05, 03:49 PM | #3 | |
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aint this about a bitch
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11-21-05, 03:58 PM | #4 | ||
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Listnin...............Beats Nice
Emotinos Good Deliverys Dope Lyrics Are Kool Flows On Point,You DOnt Fall Off Once Like The Secret Dont Tell Line Right Hooks Up Implicit Dope Delivery Nice Emotion Lyrcis Are Dope Presence Is Nice Hook As U On Qualitys Better Aight Its Done Overall:8/10 Good Track Plz Rtf On My "Underground Type.Ft Limited Edition
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11-21-05, 04:01 PM | #5 | |
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yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeah
I dont get mad I just get money!!!!!!!!!!!!
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11-21-05, 04:02 PM | #6 | ||
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Lmao...........
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11-22-05, 09:52 AM | #7 | |
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uppppin
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11-22-05, 05:11 PM | #8 | |
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IP:
this is mellow nice and laid back.....your flow is cool nice laid back delivery...quality is really holdin you back......your verse was cool....i dont like the hook you shoulda added a lil reverb to the hook...implicit your voice is cool ya flow aight.....hook sounds better wit implicit iono overall decent track...if yall wanna collab hit me up eckoinstincts =1=
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11-22-05, 05:23 PM | #9 | |||
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IP:
thanks for the feedback.
I'll RTF on anything if you need it.
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11-22-05, 05:41 PM | #10 | |
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well...ok delivery and lyrics and shit.But I found the flow sounded forced a bit in my opinion.Hook was ok.
Implicit's verse was ok too.Flow was better IMO.But he seemed a lil' "pressed" on the beat..as opposed to laid back..which sounded a bit awkward.. Overall...decent track.. |
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11-22-05, 06:59 PM | #11 | ||
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this beat is hot...like it...your flow does sound kind of forced and your voice is decent man...the hook on your part isnt that bad...the second verse is.....the flow is alittle better...the voice is alright.....the lyrics are alright on both parts....the hook on this part isnt that bad..
this track...wasnt bad but its wasnt great...its alright....no hate though man....just keep dropping and keep it coming man... can you drop some feedback on my old track After the Storm....RTF |
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11-23-05, 12:15 AM | #12 | |||
Power Hungry
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IP:
thanks for the feedback
and my flow sound forced? How?
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11-24-05, 01:43 PM | #13 | ||
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Listening...I love the beat man...You rode it well, nothing wrong with flow...First dude quality is a little iffy, but nothing serious...Lyrical wise, it was not the best, but it did send a message. Im feeling the hook...Second dude, Im feeling this verse...Came in well, good emotion.
Overall, solid track, something I would def. give a few more listens. Props. RTF and leave some feed on my new track "Questions" Thanx bro. |
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11-24-05, 11:04 PM | #14 | |||
Power Hungry
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thanks for the feedback.
uppin
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11-30-05, 07:22 PM | #15 | |
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Wow. I aint even think you was gonna post this one up. But it's lookin good so thanks to everyone that dropped some feed
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