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Old 11-21-05, 09:31 PM   #1
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Suicidal Thoughts mad deep

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yeah you leave feed i'll return the favor

this is a complete song it was too many mbs for soundclick i had too upload it too our myspace so ya'll could add us why'll ya'll are on there

Title:Suicidal Thoughts
I am the only one on the song

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word get at me playbois...


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Old 11-22-05, 03:20 AM   #2
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man come on uppin this shit
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Old 11-22-05, 05:00 AM   #3
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i did NOT know u were J-Roy
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Old 11-22-05, 05:16 AM   #4
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lol now u know :-) ahhahhaha
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Old 11-22-05, 02:23 PM   #5
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upppin this this is a mad deep song
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Old 11-22-05, 02:41 PM   #6
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Aight Well THe beats Nice

yeah this is deep as hell lyrics are DOPPE

Flows On Point

Gets A lil Repetatvie Like Teh effects u dun like stoppin beat n shit like that thas dope

Productions very nice your a dope producer

Deliverys nice

Presence Is Dope Very Confident

I like This Track its Dope



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Old 11-22-05, 04:51 PM   #7
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aight good looks uppin on this come on peeps
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Old 11-22-05, 11:49 PM   #8
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come on upppin this ish
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Old 11-23-05, 04:38 PM   #9
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uppin this is a deep piece
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Old 11-23-05, 05:46 PM   #10
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Biggie Smalls already made a song called "Suicidal Thoughts"...track 17 on the "Ready to die" LP



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Old 11-23-05, 05:51 PM   #11
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stfu q you wanna get hoed again?
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Old 11-23-05, 06:53 PM   #12
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hmmm its aight quality is weird...but i ike da track tho nice beat ur chorus sounds like ur lyricz so its hard to notice the switch between the verse and the hook

umm ya dubs (mini voices in the back on punchlines) are messed up ahha au prolly thought no one would notice but eh...i pay to much attention but good job...keep tryn

i consider....:: Re-recording is somethiing that should be done
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Old 11-26-05, 02:57 AM   #13
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alright flow was good you had a really nice presences i like the beat quality was good overall this was a nice track get at me about a collab no god shti though
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Old 11-26-05, 03:02 AM   #14
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o shit, there wuz sum shit on cops last week that wuz exactly like this song.
im feelin this song, ive bin in situations kinda like that b4. lyrics r aight, kinda simple tho. flows good. chorus iz koo. nice

rtf pleeze

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