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Aight

Hot little brag n boasting track basically...lyrics aren't anything special but they are nice for this type of track you know. I mean I ain't expecting deep lyrics on shit like this but you got some good lines in there, A Minor line for instance...I liked that one. Hook is pretty good...maybe add some effects in there right before your chorus so they know it's coming on ya feel. Flow was good all throughout the song, delivery was on point as well, had a more relaxed confident style on this one

Keep it up

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UNF...u need a new mic.PERIOD...ur mic sounds real tinney....

or...u may jus need to tweak ur editing process


ur flow is good

rode the beat well


delivery is different = a good thing



not bad dawg



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damn this is def. the best song i've heard from you....u dont really have tha voice BUT you made it up with ya pressense and flow you sound diff. on this track whihc is a good plus.......this is pretty good..except the lyrics aren't the best...but overall this aint too shabby man...keep on droppin:7.5/10

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sick beat man !!

voice a lil more clear..still hard to hear ya....flow is on...ur voice needs to b thicker tho...lyrics from wut i herd is on...presence is nice...u need to work on quality more tho man

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Upp.....................

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Listening:

Real Nice Beat.....Voice needs to be more clear but your flow is real good....presence is on point....lyrics are aight....hook LMAO is nice dawg

keep it up 7/10

o.k *listenin*

cocky track like ya sed but that ain't a bad thing every now and again, beat is pretty dope, flow is gud i like it, quality isn't mixtape quality but gud enough for this, lyrics aren't fire but they don't need to be for this style track,

overall = nice track here, pretty tight, keep droppin

can ya rtf on this-
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=217221

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Typing as I listen......ok beat is different..somewhat amatuerish but decent...u opened ah'ight coulda been stronger to really catch the listener....ya flow is def improving u getting good wit this flow but u need to add sum more flows to ya arsenal...cuz it gets repetitive...hook is weak...mostly do to quality.....ya delivery has a decent energy but u haven't mastered influctions u still jus raise ya tone instead of using ya voice like an instrument....lyrics I was feeling....dawg dat aint u....it came across as a put on...be yaself in ya music ....I garuantee it'll come out that much better....be overall not bad....ez....1

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Thx Man

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ok beat is sick....

intro is a bit weird too much reverb...

ok first verse

flow is pretty good needs switching up everynow and agen so it sounds better coz it gets a bit repetitive lyrics are kool... spit in ya normal voice dont put one on it sounds like your putting a deep voice on

hook is ite not bad

second verse same as the first flow stops and starts lyrics are kool... emotion is iite delivery aint too good sounds like your mumbling or maybe i jus canyt understand ya

overall not a bad track man

stay real wiv ya uk accent n spit naturally theres nothing worse than a fake... keep it up man pz

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