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Old 12-16-05, 10:17 PM   #1
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Old 12-17-05, 11:32 AM   #2
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Holly fuckin molly no1 replied to this...

this has to be yo best work ...am impressed,
emotions had me on this...imagery was vivid

Her hands around my neck; gagging me.
Feeling my throat being punctured by her fingers,
a death feeling inside of me quietly lingers,
"honey, honey, please I can't breathe"
"Your the key to my twelve babies death,


^^damn.. nice work shawty
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Old 12-17-05, 02:38 PM   #3
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Drop two links or this will be closed
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Old 12-17-05, 05:11 PM   #4
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ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life.
Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8
ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do.
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private
ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged*
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Old 12-18-05, 09:30 AM   #5
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uPPIN................
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ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life.
Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8
ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do.
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private
ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged*
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Old 12-18-05, 10:09 AM   #6
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this was all that plus more, emtion was there flow was nice concept was great and you delievered a prefect drop nicely done
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Old 12-18-05, 10:31 AM   #7
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ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life.
Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8
ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do.
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private
ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged*
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Old 12-18-05, 01:03 PM   #8
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The spelling errors set me off.
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Old 12-18-05, 01:05 PM   #9
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Ditto...............
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ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life.
Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8
ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do.
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private
ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged*
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Old 12-18-05, 01:09 PM   #10
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DAMN.....................nice WORK fasho....................real nice work



yea this is your best NO DOUBT....emotion and Vocab was there....stayed strong through the whole VERSE....DAMN/
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Old 12-18-05, 04:54 PM   #11
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Thank you................
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ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life.
Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8
ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do.
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private
ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged*
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Old 12-20-05, 07:58 AM   #12
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*slapz herself in da face, then pinches herself* yup ok dis was fo real.....lol.....good piece ma.......hella good!!!....da emotion was VERY deep; da flow was dope as hell; imagery was tiight; omg we need 2 do a collabo sumtime......get @ me.....10/10...keep up da good work ma...1
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Old 12-20-05, 11:36 AM   #13
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O_o....Thank you.......
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ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life.
Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8
ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do.
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private
ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged*
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Old 12-20-05, 10:17 PM   #14
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Now this was some seriously dope work.

I was amazed.

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Old 12-20-05, 11:33 PM   #15
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o_O Perfect flow? Like half of it doesn't even rhyme...and what the FUCK at the line 'like doing number two but with blood' and 'increasingly flood'. The grammar was off hoe.
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