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Old 01-07-06, 11:18 AM   #1
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My Name Is MAD ft Jay-Z

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Ive now got my new mic so i thought I'd record! I thought i wouldnt come with my usual,Bring It On Motherfucker style as Rev calls it!

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Intro:Mad Knight
Verse 1:Mad Knight
Hook: Mad Knight
Verse 2: Jay-z
Beat: Jay-z - My Name Is HOV

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Old 01-07-06, 11:29 AM   #3
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i like the pannin at the beginin...its nice..beat choice is grimey...flows gettin better...lyrics are nice...quality is koo...gotta get a pop filter...and u gotta compress vocals..and stand 6 INCHES FROM THE MIC....hook is koo....jayz verse obviously good
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Old 01-07-06, 11:49 AM   #4
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love this beat


ur flow wasn't bad...but the vocals are real loud and boomy


Jayz part was dope, of course, but wasn't blended well with yours


decent for what it was. But, as a song, it was lacking.




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Old 01-07-06, 02:26 PM   #5
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shittt, you got a real strong uk accent lol, u sound kinda like braintax actually dunno y lol

nice flow nd shit newayz, and your delivery woz decent. gud track actually 7.5/10


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Old 01-07-06, 02:27 PM   #6
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Lmao..
You want Jayz to make your song look good.
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Old 01-07-06, 02:48 PM   #7
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Yeahhh

Mad...

Flows gettin better,quite good

Deliverys Hot

Emotions koo,could be upped

Hooks nice

Lyrics are koo

Jay-z verse nice obviously

Overall:8/10

Keep up!
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Old 01-08-06, 07:19 AM   #8
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thanks for the feed

uppin.......
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Old 01-08-06, 07:49 AM   #9
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nice beat
flow is gettin much better
fukk shazz(hes weak)
delieveryz nice
emotions could be upped
quality igght
sound like u eatin tha mic though lol
dope track keep up fam 8/10
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Old 01-08-06, 09:33 AM   #10
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iite intro u sounded american at the begginin u got a proper strong accent...

u kick in ok could be much better... emotion is meh so is delivery but keep makin songs n it'll come in in time... flow is pretty good not bad, falls off a lil bit though lyrics are pretty kooll

hook pretty goood, feelin it...

jay-z parrt is sick

hold the mic away when ya rapin so it dunt prevent ya words to be claryfied n dat

overall not dat bad man keep it up we shud collab sumtime init
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Old 01-08-06, 08:03 PM   #11
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thanks for feed!

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Old 01-09-06, 11:16 AM   #12
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Old 01-09-06, 11:17 AM   #13
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flow needs work as does delivery...but all that caught my attention from ya verse is that in parts you were slurring your words like you'd been on a night out and THEN spat this...work on pronounciation a lil more but potential is there if you work at it enough
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