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01-08-06, 04:43 PM | #1 | ||
in your system
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Throwing It Right Back
IP:
yo, i'm....
i'm throwing knives at the axis of the world demanding answers to my questions that were never heard my only rifle is for the future thats rightfully ours because i'm saving all my shots for the stars a broken world, kept in-line by thieves and crooks its the same scene over, when i'd rather read the book of a giant foot, in a mouth that has the munchies and its so far in, its booting foreigners from the country using tax payers as funding, riding nude on saddled mules and only being fueled by needless feuds handling fuel but what to do, who really cares what i'm feeling? the only barrel i have, i need it to sleep in i'm not waving my gun, shooting independence bullets too many trigger fingers, getting their friends to pull it there's no justice without a just cause right from the shelf? but they're the ones who broke the vase and who's suppose to govern the ones who make the laws its sad when you know everyones clapping but its not applause so im.... i'm throwing knives at the axis of the world demanding answers to my questions that were never heard my only rifle is for the future thats rightfully ours because i'm saving all my shots for the stars i've been dreaming of this day before life was granted when i roll away the dice and take my chances stand up, make a charge for freedom say 'i'll fight for it' and actually mean it not being stuck in a debate wheather we should go to war but debate on why the hell we even have it for i wouldn't doubt it if that act is treason im still waiting for the day they put a tax on breathin in any season, i'll bring my reign down in the heart of winter make my crown from this whittled worlds discarded splinters i figure i'm that one clever mouse who finds the cheese in the maze never looking to the other rats, chewing their way so theres no need to mass massive ranks, unsheated swords believing in a leader trying to even an already even score so i'm.... i'm throwing knives at the axis of the world demanding answers to my questions that were never heard my only rifle is for the future thats rightfully ours because i'm saving all my shots for the stars __________________________________________ http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=219058 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=219068
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this world is a drug, and everyone's selfish FLY FREE Last edited by Drakel : 01-08-06 at 05:24 PM. |
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01-08-06, 09:57 PM | #2 | ||
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IP:
I'll throw knifes at your face.
Good OM. |
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01-08-06, 10:59 PM | #3 | |
Can u guess 2v's Gender?
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IP:
Nice drop fam.
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01-09-06, 02:34 PM | #4 | ||
Banned: Cheating
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IP:
Nice Shirt Homie......This Had Good Flow, Nice Vocab And It Was Enjoyabel To Read. The Whole Concept Was Nice And You Hook Was Nicely Done As Well Drakel......Keep It Up Homie.
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01-09-06, 11:57 PM | #5 | ||
Banned: Cheating
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IP:
i really liked you topic and the hook was real nice as well. i think you got real good talen, i've read your other open mic which was real nice. hopin to see some more from you.
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01-10-06, 08:20 AM | #6 | ||
Middle Weight
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IP:
HOLY SHIT! anotha one bites da dust! lol just messin.....damn pa GOOD OM here....def was feelin dis ALL DA WAY thru.....good vocab; i think da hook was da best part(my opinion).....neways good piece AGAIN...keep up da work pa...1
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01-10-06, 03:36 PM | #7 | |
iLL-Literate
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IP:
Nice drop..
i've been dreaming of this day before life was granted when i roll away the dice and take my chances depth in that right there. |
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01-11-06, 03:12 PM | #8 | ||
in your system
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IP:
thanks man
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01-11-06, 06:52 PM | #9 | |
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP:
flow was good vocab was really good
you took a played topic and wrote about drakel most ppl jsut say what they see or hear on the news you smpoke ur mid and used alot fo metaphores you made a piece that would have been verrrrry boring interesting props o nthsi piece and the creativity
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01-12-06, 11:58 PM | #10 | ||
in your system
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IP:
thanks
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01-13-06, 12:10 AM | #11 | ||
The Topical Juggernaut
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IP:
i wouldn't doubt it if that act is treason
im still waiting for the day they put a tax on breathin Realist lines you've ever dropped. Concept wasnt too bad, which creates reason for the emotion... as to why you wrote it. Some people talk, some people do. I hate fake people. Flow was fairly good, vocab small. However the overall message outweighs your flaws in my opinion. Not your best drop ever... but a damn good relayinto your train of thought bro. Keep it up. Peace.
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Crhyme Sindicate The unexamined life is not worth living.
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01-16-06, 04:48 PM | #12 | ||
Middle Weight
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IP:
Very good....
Great emotion throughout this, it has a great message, basically it is a real piece - nicely constructed, some very good lines (like the one Mentalz quoted)...flow was very good...I cant emphasise how much you can feel your emotion in this....but overall this was very good.... Stay Up |
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05-16-06, 08:45 AM | #13 | ||
in your system
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IP:
word, i like this om
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05-16-06, 02:31 PM | #14 | ||
-da prophit-
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IP:
word... doctor. u havent droped somethin in awhile and to come back and drop something like this i am impressed. nice topic. u had some multies and flow was good. creativty is all there nice imagry. word not saying its ur best piece but good drop. hopefuly ill see a couple more soon.
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