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Old 01-29-06, 07:26 AM   #1
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20 Ways (Dear Mama) feat. Mardell Maxwell (Ya Bois Back)
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"20 Ways"

1st Verse: Intermental
Hook: Mardell
2nd Verse: Intermental
Hook: Mardell
3rd Verse: Intermental
Hook: Mardell

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220738
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220715
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Old 01-29-06, 07:31 AM   #2
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Yo inter ma man, loving that trak dawg, just liek the feeling, and the attitude wit it.. give it 10/10 , hooks awsome too
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Old 01-29-06, 07:31 AM   #3
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Yeah

intros koo

Aight

FLows Dope,I Would Have Thought u been rusty
but
Nooooooooooooo!!!

lol
deliverys koo,feelin it

upp your volume a lil,its hard to hear

Emotions koo,fellin the vibe

The hooks nice,i cant hear it that well tho

2nd Verse:
Flows better tyhan first doopppe!!
I Like this verse better than the first
Feelin these lyrics

Hook.............................................

3rd Verse:

Damn your damn verses keep gettin better

lyrics dope........

Hook
Weerd
This is dope

Overall:8/10

Just upp the vol a lil

you need a mic like mine

would make u sound doppe!
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Old 01-29-06, 07:32 AM   #4
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thanks fam................
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Old 01-29-06, 09:37 AM   #5
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aawww he loves his mommy

dude on the hook has a nyce voice, I liked your verses on here yo...sounds like something that could be on the radio with a little more production work...good track dude, flow's on opint andd lyrics were felt...keep it up dude
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Old 01-29-06, 10:04 AM   #6
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lol yup i do love my moms.....she was goin thru a real bad time so this lightened it all up...thanks alot fo ure feed...i apreciate it....
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Old 01-29-06, 12:35 PM   #7
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upppin.................
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Old 01-29-06, 04:37 PM   #8
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comes in......beats ok..


its kinda hard to make out what your saying.....voice is kinda muffled...lyrics that i can make out are good....

the hook is nice....but it seems like its a lil low.......

overall i cant say too much bad about this....except for the quality...flow has gotten better from your last few drops....keep it up....im sure your mom loved it
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Old 01-29-06, 06:20 PM   #9
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Thanks fam....yeah quality sucked......but nothin i can do bout that fam...thanks fo the feed
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Old 01-30-06, 02:29 PM   #10
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upppin mayne................
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Old 01-30-06, 07:16 PM   #11
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Damn!

This your best fa sho man, fa sho fa sho lol. I thought that if your vocals on your verse were upped a lil bit then i'd most def download this because the hook is so tight and the beat is smooth. your voice and quality is so perfect now. maybe it's more your quality because you had to much of a hiss before but now it's smooth. your lyrics are pretty good as well. but overall this is a tight track. If your able to fix your vocals volume do that and let me know. i'd love to download this.

rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220364

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Old 01-31-06, 02:40 PM   #12
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word thanks fam alot.....i apreciate dat....i dunno how to up the volume but ill try
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Old 01-31-06, 03:07 PM   #13
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I listened to this through my computer speakers and noticed that your mic had a muffled sound at the start inter...

then, the beat was louder than your vocals...amp them 1-2 dedibels


beat is nice too

flow is cool here...nothing out of place...nothing major one way or the other = straight

hook sounds good

Ur voice is changing inter...should be interesting to hear how you adapt to that

my boy growin up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

lol...jus messin man


nice sounding track



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Old 01-31-06, 04:11 PM   #14
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Lol thanks fam...I apreciate dat
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Old 02-01-06, 03:56 PM   #15
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Listening...

Beat is cool...quality isn't the best on this...but flow is cool, delivery is on, lyrics are pretty good...

Hook is dope. Is this the same guy who was on that "No" track..?

Anyway...good track, keep it up...

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