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02-16-06, 10:09 PM
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Fin(The End!!)....first track u hearin from Yung Miss!!!
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hey watz good yall???!!!.......itz yung miss!! i'm new to the forum but im playin on takin it ova u feel!!!...lol.....but yea...dis one of da first all rap no singin songz i did since i got my mic..yes ya girl singz......if u wanna hear all my trackz...check me out at soundclick.com/connieclark....but if u just wanna hear fin so i can get sum feed..the linkz r below!! enjoy
Fin ( The End) lo-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getp...id=3441152&q=lo hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getp...id=3441152&q=hi |
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02-16-06, 10:11 PM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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well you gotta drop links on songs you've left feed on before you post in here
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02-16-06, 10:22 PM
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Yo no shit i heard this track like a week ago just searchin soundclick shit dope man
fasho whole track straight gangsta.. flow 8/10 vocal qual 7/10 lyrical ability 8/10 shit was hard ma keep it up peep www.soundclick.com/jsummers or check da link in da sig
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02-16-06, 10:28 PM
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oh my bad..here r my linkz!!
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2660379 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2660386 |
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02-16-06, 11:41 PM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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Hmm i took a listen..this aint too bad girl....your pretty good..your quality is horrid tho thats ur main problem boost up ur emotion and you'll be pretty good i enjoyed this yeah it was like one of the tracks u show ur friends and they like 'cool' soo yeah keep it comin
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02-18-06, 12:00 PM
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IP:
yo ya flow is strate, ya delivery could be upped, like Past Tense said show a lil more emotion.......and ya quality could be upped a bit, but otha than that it wuz a nice track....keep droppen..
pz ~1~
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02-18-06, 03:47 PM
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is back...
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wow... work on delivery... and flow... you'll be pretty sick...
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02-21-06, 09:01 PM
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Was feelin the beat.. lyrics were coo. Straight shit.
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02-21-06, 09:44 PM
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O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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IP:
You got some pretty good potential.....but the flow on this could have been better. Also, your delivery was kinda monotone. Try using some inflection here and there.....this wasn't a bad track though.....keep it up
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02-21-06, 09:53 PM
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IP:
im feelin your hype energy..your voice kinda reminds me of lady fiya's ...nice quality clearly spitting i fux with dat..you got nice lines....great metaphores and similies...the beat is dope always wanted to spit to it ...you gotta nice rap voice i must say...I enjoyed your lines...although u used the word lunches.. lol but thats aight!...i see u got mad potential from this track ...i can hear you gettin nasty on a more serious track keep it up
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02-22-06, 12:49 AM
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IP:
datz watz good...thanx fa da feed...itz greatly appreciated...especially from the great MADAM MERK!!!....chea!!...^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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