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02-23-06, 10:50 AM | #1 | ||
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feed back pleaze
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Threw da hood n da ghetto//
If u follow m3 ill sho u y dey bust metal// N ill sho all da hood rats//n dead beat dads// N baby mommas dat sniff crack// N parks where all da kids play tag // But dey cant run wit out seein a needle or weed bag// U need 2 see every thing dat I see// Den pinch ya self 2 sho u its not a dream// Now ima tell u bout da projects// N if u aint dead yet// ull probably die next// Afta dem niggas was killed jux 4 tryna flex// So u betta n invest n sumthin I call a vest// U cant expect 2 get a gurl// Cuz most of dem broads been around da world// Every gurl is a mystery// yea she look all clean but every gurl has a history// In if u wanna see some cribs// I can sho u more welfare den a poverty live// So if u sayin “aint no 1 livin worst as me” I can sho u a home wit more kids den a nursery// On dese street every day som1 loosin a life// U cant walk around here wit out som1 runnin up onya wit knife// People bettin money on a pitbull fight// N I watch niggas get shot up ova game of dice// 2 bad dats not mynes but dats my cuzins life// lol |
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02-23-06, 12:05 PM | #2 | ||
I Chill in Asylums
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This was ok just for a freestyle, but u might wanna make ur lines a lil bit longer. The flow on this was ok nothing special tho, ur vocab needs increasing also. U should add in more multies to make it flow better and some internal rhyming. But try some of those things and get at me and i'll give u more feed aight man. Please return the favor by giving me some feed on anything in my sig, doesnt matta which one. Peace.
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02-25-06, 02:19 PM | #3 | ||
The Games Prodigy
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IP:
Im feelin ya style play boy nice southern feel to it no doubt ~WUN~
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02-25-06, 03:40 PM | #4 | ||
New to RV
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IP:
thanks man ill b sure 2 give u feed man peace
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02-25-06, 03:44 PM | #5 | ||
NO SURRENDER
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u Da ILLeST YO .
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02-25-06, 05:28 PM | #6 | ||
New to RV
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IP:
thanks man i saw u when u dis da disnesy bugs bunny dude dat shit was funny
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02-25-06, 09:00 PM | #7 | ||
Middle Weight
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IP:
ight i'ma c real wit ya it was ok but not tha best i've seen if ur gonna talk bout tha geto go in depth wit so i feel ya pain u feel me ...but on tha otha hand it gets 6/10 keep workin on it & u'll get it down soon enuff
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You ain't gotta like me, but you're gonna respect me (Or else) or else you get wet like a jigsknee Take ten of these and live, that'll impress me Last edited by Payn : 02-26-06 at 11:42 AM. |
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02-26-06, 10:25 PM | #8 | |||
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yea i guess but yea thanks 4 da feed |
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