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04-05-06, 12:34 PM
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Controlled Violence...soldier boy!...holla atcha boy!!!!!!!!!!!
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^^Click on "Controlled Violence...soldier boy!" Beat: Apelo Productionz Hook: Built in with the beat "soldier boy" Verses: 1 and 2, Tha Q Holla 1 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225757 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225585 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225734 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225788 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225790 |
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04-05-06, 12:39 PM
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nice beat....lol @ u still doin the my name shit
good come in...flows goodness,"basicly" yea got the big flow nice multis in the ether line,lol thx for the shout out..lol @ bleepin this out nicly writtin man..to true to man nice ass track bro 1nE
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04-05-06, 01:09 PM
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sounds nice...might need a hook, over the soldier boy part....to me it feels like its missing sumtin....good song tho...lyrics n shit are straight
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04-05-06, 02:56 PM
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preciate the feedback
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04-05-06, 04:20 PM
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Listenin, lol yay the my name is tha q is back...im like the dmx samples up in there...beat is real gangsta and im feelin it...feelin the multis and how u came in...lyrics are good...multis are pretty crazy over here...and flow is pretty sick...delivery is gettin real hot..this is a dope mixtape track..and I think you should consider addin' to tha hook give it dat well rouned feel....9/10...
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04-05-06, 04:53 PM
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^^Preciate it
I actually considered rapping over the hook, but chose to leave it as is. I might do another one and do the hook over. 1 |
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04-05-06, 05:06 PM
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Word u should try dat would sound fresh...get at me fam...1
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04-05-06, 05:58 PM
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^^^ehhh...I listened again and decided it was fine the way it is.
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04-05-06, 07:38 PM
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I think you could have lowered the volume on the "My name iiiiiissssssss Tha Q" part, but the rest is nice. You got a really nice flow/rhyme scheme man. Honest
 ™PS....thanks for the shout out 
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04-06-06, 08:22 AM
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^^Preciate da feed
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04-09-06, 09:32 PM
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OYD
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eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeer up
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