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04-06-06, 06:45 PM
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I Want It All (leave Links I'll Rtf Asap)
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new track on the soundclick page
www.soundclick.com/eastsyde http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=224618 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225534 i appreciate honest feed and comments on what i need to work on and what can be improved |
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04-07-06, 10:15 AM
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Light Weight
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IP:
uppin for some feed
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04-07-06, 10:40 AM
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Bangs like bikini attol
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IP:
Ahahahah I knew it was gonna be this beat the second I seen the title of your thread..
This was one of the very first beats I ever dropped on back in late 04.. Some quick feed though, lyrics are kinda simple... They get ya message across well, but you could definatly use some improvement on ya rhyme schemes and flow... Especially those parts where you quickly speed up ya flow to fit in extra words.. Thats a big no no......... Keep it up man.. One of the biggest things you need work on is rhyme schemes and flow.. Everything else seems to be goin well for ya.. Peace. |
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04-07-06, 10:44 AM
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#4
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Light Weight
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IP:
thanks for the feed...uppin
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04-08-06, 09:50 AM
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Light Weight
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IP:
uppin this for more feed
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04-08-06, 09:59 PM
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Light Weight
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IP:
uppin for more...
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04-09-06, 02:13 AM
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Hell yeah
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IP:
Beat: i aint really feeling it, just not my style
Hook: pretty good, fits with the beat, pretty nice Lyrics: not bad, simple but thats what i like Quality: could be better, but still, its still good Flow: pretty ill, you didnt have problems with that overall, i listened to your music before, this your best track so far RTF ON "GETTING COCKY" |
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04-09-06, 10:31 AM
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Light Weight
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IP:
thanks i'll do that....uppin for more
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04-09-06, 04:38 PM
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#9
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Light Weight
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IP:
still uppin for feed
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04-09-06, 07:59 PM
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OYD
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IP:
What's hot:
ur voice at the beginning...and ur flow on the hook...I think u and Team One might sound good on a track together...how old are you? like 17? Flow is pretty decent...a tad mundane, but effective What's not: Beat is loud as hell...ugh Your vocals are muffled...work on that mixing and EQ'ing bro The "suck my dick" line was completely uncreative...But, then again, how creative can you tell someone to suck you dick? Overall: I love the sound of this track, mostly because of the beat. Your voice and flow have a magnetic quality to them. Keep droppin bro...Elevate that flow some too and work on the EQ levels |
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04-09-06, 08:36 PM
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Light Weight
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IP:
lol that's not me on the hook....thanks for the feed....
oh and i'm 19 uppin for more |
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04-10-06, 02:14 PM
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#12
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Light Weight
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IP:
still uppin this y'all
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04-10-06, 05:40 PM
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Light Weight
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IP:
still uppin this
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04-10-06, 07:42 PM
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Im Short.Ur Fat.He's Gay.
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IP:
Beat's Dope.
Flo fer ya chorus is really nice.... The quality on your voice in the verse is str8 garbage. I dunno, I was expectin more in the verse judgin by the hook.... Dont even sound the same.....maybe the hook was there before u spit? Dunno....I never heard this songs real version. |
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04-10-06, 09:57 PM
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Light Weight
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IP:
like i said that's not me on the hook...anyway uppin
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