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Check in by: 04-10-06 at 09:40 PM

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vinceness_deala has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-07-06 09:41 PM.

David Lama has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-07-06 09:43 PM.

David Lama, u don't want no drama/ Cuz I'll put your thoughts in a bag and send it mama/ But first imma read it and see how u thought u could fuck with me/ then Imma put you body under the street/ I'm living a life of crime/ I'm a rapist how i fuck up your rhymes/ then u gonna wanna battle again and i ain't got that time/ I'm done fuckin wit u, u know the rules/ u and me is like pootles and pit bulls. FUCK WIT IT

And if your black you fucking suck.

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F the funny shit. I came to abuse you
I’ll fuck Vince up worse than Stone Cold Steve Austin used to
he said he’d be a challenge, I’ll smack this dude
found out V ain’t just for Vendetta. but for whackness too
skill level?, I’m up a ahead by a bunch of degrees
cuz VD = Illness. only when referring to venereal disease
dead with the first line, you sure are frail, damn.
I wrapped this deal up quicker than a good car salesman
I got the punches, only downfolds been the fame
only straight line you ever had was the underscore in ya name

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the a before ahead dont belong there

its suppose to be

skill level?, I’m up ahead by a bunch of degrees
cuz VD = Illness. only when referring to venereal disease

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Voted For: David Lama


David Lama, u don't want no drama/ Cuz I'll put your thoughts in a bag and send it mama/ But first imma read it and see how u thought u could fuck with me/ then Imma put you body under the street/ I'm living a life of crime/ I'm a rapist how i fuck up your rhymes/ then u gonna wanna battle again and i ain't got that time/ I'm done fuckin wit u, u know the rules/ u and me is like pootles and pit bulls. FUCK WIT IT

NO this verse structure made it undable for me to read it learn how to write a verse and then start battling

vs.

F the funny shit. I came to abuse you
I’ll fuck Vince up worse than Stone Cold Steve Austin used to
Ight nice one 8/10
he said he’d be a challenge, I’ll smack this dude
found out V ain’t just for Vendetta. but for whackness too
Good 7/10
skill level?, I’m up a ahead by a bunch of degrees
cuz VD = Illness. only when referring to venereal disease
Lol nice 8/10
dead with the first line, you sure are frail, damn.
I wrapped this deal up quicker than a good car salesman
Eh ight 8/10
I got the punches, only downfolds been the fame
only straight line you ever had was the underscore in ya name
Good closer 8/10

Oveal 39/50

Overal I think david llama won this one

Please rtf honestly:
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Voted For: vinceness_deala

vincesses verse
David Lama, u don't want no drama/ Cuz I'll put your thoughts in a bag and send it mama/ But first imma read it and see how u thought u could fuck with me/ then Imma put you body under the street/ I'm living a life of crime/ I'm a rapist how i fuck up your rhymes/ then u gonna wanna battle again and i ain't got that time/ I'm done fuckin wit u, u know the rules/ u and me is like pootles and pit bulls. FUCK WIT IT
2/10 need 2 elevate no hate


davids verse
F the funny shit. I came to abuse you
I’ll fuck Vince up worse than Stone Cold Steve Austin used to
he said he’d be a challenge, I’ll smack this dude
found out V ain’t just for Vendetta. but for whackness too
skill level?, I’m up a ahead by a bunch of degrees
cuz VD = Illness. only when referring to venereal disease
dead with the first line, you sure are frail, damn.
I wrapped this deal up quicker than a good car salesman
I got the punches, only downfolds been the fame
only straight line you ever had was the underscore in ya name
6/10
both need 2 elevate 4 real
v/david lama


Vote switched

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...If We Livein 2 Die.....

my b i vote 4 david lama wrong box lol srry.....

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...Why We Fightin 2 Live Homie.....
...If We Livein 2 Die.....

aiight there it go so u can read it better

David Lama, u don't want no drama
Cuz I'll put your thoughts in a bag and send it mama
But first imma read it and see how u thought u could fuck with me
then Imma put you body under the street
I'm living a life of crime
I'm a rapist how i fuck up your rhymes
then u gonna wanna battle again and i ain't got that time
I'm done fuckin wit u, u know the rules
u and me is like pootles and pit bulls. FUCK WIT IT

vote up people. .................................................. ....

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Voted For: David Lama

he said he’d be a challenge, I’ll smack this dude
found out V ain’t just for Vendetta. but for whackness too


Nice bar.


What and who the fucks a vinceness.

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vinceness is a block here in chicago u bitch ass white boy. come battle me i'll get ur ass

Sorry your too dope for me.

I mean:

"David Lama, u don't want no drama/ Cuz I'll put your thoughts in a bag and send it mama/"

You might send some thoughts to my mum? cool.

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