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04-11-06, 06:19 PM
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The Paragraph President
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Keepin' It Raw - Leave links I'll gladly rtf.
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www.myspace.com/paranoidxl
all done by me, except for the beat. leave links and shit, holla http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2716606 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2716599
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04-11-06, 06:36 PM
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OYD
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RTF on my new track pls
What's hot: beat is something LE would flow to...intense ur flow is good delivery fit the tone of the track lyrics weren't bad at all What's not: vocal quality sounds odd, fuzzy and muffled... Overall: GOod sounding track...the quality jus needed to be upped...not bad though bro...I liked it |
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04-11-06, 07:23 PM
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Listenin..hold on the mp3 player on myspace fuckin up...*waiting till it starts* *whistles*
Listenin now...beat is nice yea LE wud do this....youre flow is decent...and ure articulation is good but it rlly does sound like arnold schwarzernegga...delivery is decent...lyrics are good....very nice....quality is decent i think..ure emotion has got better..and so has delivery only prolem i got is tha voice n a lil of ya delivery but keep workin at tha delivery..hot..1
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04-12-06, 06:38 PM
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Listening...
Yeah I would rip the shit out of this beat... Flow is start and stop again...breath control, again, in need of work. But opverall, flow is good. Lyrics are good...but you should really get some better concepts...Delivery is good. Quality was better on the last track, but it's bearable. overall, you are elevating. Just keep at it. |
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04-14-06, 08:21 PM
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The Paragraph President
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thanks uppin.....
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