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06-23-06, 12:01 AM
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Ike
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Ike - Goodnight
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word...im bout to drop my feedback links...so dont close this n shit...
havent dropped a track on RV in a while.....so yea... www.soundclick.com/youngike Goodnight listen closely...its a nice lil story track
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06-23-06, 12:10 AM
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Ike
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http://community.rapverse.com/showp...399&postcount=5
http://community.rapverse.com/showp...392&postcount=5
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06-23-06, 12:25 AM
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I don't lose
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the knife to the wrist line seemed off, but the hook was banannas...very thought provoking, deep, and well preformed....effects on it just added to the ill ass appeal of it, there are parts where the verses can be upped, honestly i say you work on that n take this to a studio n try n get it on a demo...this is the kinda hook that can get you noticed....
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dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead  |
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06-23-06, 12:32 AM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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I love this song
I downloaded it and i'm puttin it on my ghetto ass mp3 player  the story is tight...hook is ill..verse is good..this is the dopest shit i've heard ina while on here |
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06-23-06, 12:47 AM
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Listening...
I loved this beat...I used this beat for Birds in the Metal...lmfao... Flow is nice. I'm liking it a shitload. Lyrics are deep...I'm fucking loving this track. I'm loving the hook as well...true shit true shit. And what's even better...I can relate to this track. Wow...this song is amazing man. WOOWWW at that closer.  You are one talented mu fucka. That's all I gotta say man. Amazing track. Best I've ever heard on RV, period. |
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06-23-06, 01:06 AM
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*listening*
Lol... beat is dope man, with the guitar strumming shit in the background.. dope man. Flowed on point, good shit... da fool was muthafuckin fed up!.. word  . Someone's gotta be happy somewhere, right? Right... Lyrics were good. Nice lil story here man. The hook I was feeling... niceness man.. keep it up on these tracks, foolio!Overall song is dope man... give me this beat. -_- Might do me a lil story track on it also, hoe! Keep droppin tracks... 8/10 Now gimmie your damn mic! haha, just kidding... ...no seriously, give me it. -_-
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06-23-06, 01:47 AM
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aight....
the first verse... the reverb sounds heavy but the flow is good..the lyrics is good too and i can feel the emotion that comes wit it.. hook..i like this hook it sounds good man... 2nd verse.. the flow is still on point and everything..i think the second verse is betta then the first verse IMO.. Hook again... 3rd verse..flow is still on point and everything..the emotion is real good yo i can feel it i can really pick up on how u wanted it to feel and everything.. I like this track man its real nice..i like the beat too it fits the concept of the whole song perfect to me man..good job.. can u hit this up and leave some feed man... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230364
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06-28-06, 01:13 PM
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I see dumb people
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aiight, peepin...
beat is pretty nice. likin' it first verse is coo. Nice lil flow on this. Dope ass emotion, and as usual you bring the heat with the lyrics. so overall a tight lil verse. not much more to sayt hook is nice. is pretty catchy. so props to that. second verse, seems like you upped the emotion from first verse on this one. good flow, delivery. lyrics tight as usual. fire verse. good shittt hook again third verse, flows there, lyrics. a nice verse again overall, i liked this track a lot man. good shit. flow was there, lyrics. dope ass feel to it. I might have not said much feedback wise, but honestly, really couldn't find anything to critique on. you came pretty tight on this. good shit. 9/10 stay up RTF plz: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230662 EZ
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06-23-06, 12:59 PM
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Ike
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^ favor has been returned....thanks for the feed people
and i just uploaded a louder version...the one i had was a bit low
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06-23-06, 03:34 PM
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Fuck Parents
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intro is niiice
1st verse comes in nicely. mayne i can really relate to this. i dont know about me goin emo n shit takin a knife to my wrist but i'm really feelin this track. delivery is good, lyrics are deep....nice emotion. i dunno if you produced this or not but it's good none the less. hook is raw as fuck. ya know, there's really nothin i dont like about this, seriously. i'm likin the little voice samples n shit too. i gotta download this.....pz
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06-23-06, 11:27 PM
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I don't lose
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hey think you could RTF - http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230479
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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06-24-06, 01:17 PM
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Ike
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feed has been left...dope shit... uppin to the fuckin top
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06-24-06, 01:42 AM
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The Paragraph President
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IP:
Good beat choice man, I loved the shit LE did to it as well. Your intro was kinda weird, I disliked the echo type you gave it man. But when you start rappin it was ill fa sure, You had a insanely good emotion. You delivered nice a meaningful also with deadly lyrics. The story was appealing to me, it had a solid influence to it. Good job man.
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06-24-06, 03:57 PM
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You Cant Handle The Truth
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always great with the topical tracks, definetly a dope ass track, period
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06-24-06, 04:36 PM
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Whys That?
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IP:
Returning the feed
Playing..... these guitar rifs remind me of a ben harper track. Intro vocals are cool, dubs on it are a good effect, production and quality are fucking solid!! Emotion is solid, flows on point, lyrics and content are nice. hook's solid bro, this entire track is deep as fuck, feeling it!!! Feeling the concept of her writing back bro..... your a fucking beast bro!! Solid track. |
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