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Dear Lord all I ask is u keep me alive
Cus I'm fightin this battle just tryna survive
Nobody knows da hurt and the heat in my heart
I'm so confused I nen backtracked and dunno where to start
Mama gone and it's a sad story to tell
Tryna keep my head up but the devil tryna persue me to hell
God has been good to me and I gotta tell my story
When mama left this world she told me not to worry
So I keep the faith and still I rise
I've been through it all that's why I'm so wise
I've cried many nights and bled deep inside
Feel like my heart been cut deep long and wide
As I strive I steady rise above I've seen no light
I'm blinded on da way this journey is rocky where can I lay?
I've been put down to da ground stomped on my face
But thorugh it all God put me right back in place
I can say I survived the storm of Life
and you wouldnt ever want to obtain my strife

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I'm a real chick thats what u fail to understand...Just bring the hottest you got and I'll cool u off like a fan....Underestimate me as much as you please...I'll rip the mic so hard have you down on yo knees beggin me please!![COLOR=Green]

oh thats wassup,i was feeling it
but peep this verse out

people say youll grow out of it but ive been through the worst faise
i pray to god everday and it dont seem like church pays
and everyday im reminded of another year of pain on my bithdays

i spit that spiritual stuff too,i dont only spit fire
leave me feedback on mine

heat 4 tha hatas wiley-d

This is pretty good, slightly basic but with more experience you'll drop better. 6/10.

yea shit was good jus lil basic i feel ya topic though but we been there done dat or still doin through dat holla back n check lyrical hustla peace ma stay up

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my first battle since comin back 2 rv

lyrical hustla dont sleep rv

if i reply 2 ya post return da love heres my links

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deep still, keep it comin

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it was straight...a lil simple...try to improve on yo vocab...
put some multis in there...and try to put a lil wordplay to spice it up

i could feel this doe...get a betta ender too...

6/10

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I remember puttin quarters in the game and the Jukebox/
now i'm puttin quarters of them thangs in a shoe box/
Then i break em down no bags its just loose rocks/
no pump against me and the world i'm like 2pac
^^T-Rex

now i was expecting this shit ta be kinda mediocre
but it actually wasnt bad at all i actully got inta it
ur vocab was a lil above average...u used some complexity
but u still could use more compliacted words
the more complicated the more educated u sound (as long as it still makes sense)

flow was actually there..i didnt see a problem wit that
so once again pat yourself on the back...

i'd give this bout a 6/10 (woulda rated it higher but its short as hell)
so thats a good score in my book keep it comming

p.s: leave feed on my new piece
its "girls too much of a hassle" lol i just named it anything
holla back wit some feed back girl pc

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