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10-02-06, 06:03 PM
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what dat be...
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some werd thing i wrote JC
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FreeStyle.
Got this crunk shit ,yeah bitches rollin’ hard Got my chain rollin, 24 inches 2 far Got these kidz dealing that cocaine resadew Fuck u up quickesta so what tha fuck u gun do? U cant do shit when the barrels in ur eyes Cock that gun up, blow ur brains to the sky U cant do shit now ur bodies on that pavement u cant do shit hoe u part of my enslavement Fuck wit me, bitch ur gunna get fucked back Sex is not the issue when im pulling out my gat Its part of that angel that tells u to be good Its that 187 that’s runnin through ur hood Im not a gangsta, fuck, im not even close My lines flowin quicker than rips in panty hoes But that’s not the problem, its ur fucking face Punch u so hard bitch ,death is all u taste links later tonight |
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10-02-06, 06:09 PM
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IP:
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3087284
link 1 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3087286 link 2 Last edited by JC : 10-02-06 at 06:13 PM. |
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10-02-06, 06:19 PM
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IP:
.................................................u ppy
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10-02-06, 10:52 PM
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what dat be...
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IP:
uppy.........,,.,
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10-02-06, 10:57 PM
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eh... kinda random lines like ur not really talkin about anything... stay up.
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10-03-06, 06:30 PM
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what dat be...
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eeeeeeeeeeeeehhhhhhhhhhhh critz is ok keep um coming
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10-03-06, 06:53 PM
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Is Betta Than You
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hmm no hate but i dont think u wrote this, you dont go from rapping about babysittin and 5 dollars worth of weed to this, just seems suspicious
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10-03-06, 07:09 PM
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wat u talking about u saying that this is to good to be mine or u saying it dont sound like me i did write this ask troublesome , fuck unno babysitting money not good enough 4 me????lol
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10-04-06, 08:24 AM
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Black Poet
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This was alright I guess, nothing to blow my brains out about !! I expect better
from you now to be fair. |
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10-05-06, 09:15 AM
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i hear ya...................
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10-17-06, 08:55 PM
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It was aight there was a couple good lines but up your vocab words like sex gun etc.. can be upgraded into sinful intercourse and reaper of life... ya feel me make the reader think instead of just them reading the same old words.
Peep my OM link in sig
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