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10-19-06, 03:16 PM
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High thinking
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I lead a life filled with crime yeah, im stuck in the streets Im steady losing peace of mind Cause of cops on the beat So where do I go to whom do I turn? Im headed to eternal damnation, forever I'll burn and never I'll learn.., Cause im still stuck in my ways Im stuck in a daze like a bat ive lost sight, yea im stuck in a cave Im stuck in a maze Im trapped and my mind is a haze Things no longer makes since ive lost track of my days So now i will blaze Just to feel oh so glorious Im ready to die, so now i feel oh so notorious But still im on a quest and ive veered from my path and knowledge is the water that i use for my bath Uppin for feedback http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204207 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235577
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The only thing to fear is fear itself and fear conquers all!!!! Last edited by Young Fear : 10-20-06 at 09:12 AM. |
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10-19-06, 09:59 PM
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why so serious!!??
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u aint gon get no feedback till u get some links up in this muthafucka
are ya'll that stupid that u cant read the rules havent u figured out why u aint gettin no feed when people dont follow the rules??
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10-19-06, 10:04 PM
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scotia's finest
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we need a mod cause this is gay
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10-20-06, 08:58 AM
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I've been giving feedback on others's shit since Ive been here. Just forgot to put up links.
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10-20-06, 09:13 AM
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Uppin. Let me know what's hood
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10-20-06, 01:36 PM
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why so serious!!??
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then why dont u???...show proof that u left feed or no one gon think u did
just cuz the mods are gone dont mean u cant respect the rulez round here
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10-20-06, 02:35 PM
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What the fuck you talking bout? I edited fresh links in already. They at the bottom of my verse.
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10-20-06, 04:22 PM
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why so serious!!??
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^^lmao just fuckin witcha
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10-20-06, 08:41 PM
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still need thoughts
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10-20-06, 09:07 PM
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why so serious!!??
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im thinkin im hungry
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10-20-06, 10:32 PM
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illmatic
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If you aint gonna give feedback on the piece then dont post in this thread. Still uppin for feedback.
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10-22-06, 12:15 PM
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???????????? Damn, niggas cant give no feedback?
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10-23-06, 11:01 AM
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illmatic
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still uppin. Where the fuck is niggas at?
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10-25-06, 11:34 AM
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++ON TOP++
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shawty this was actually decent, from the look of the verse itself i wasn't expectin it to be any good. but you got a pretty good flow, and some ight attempt at punches. So the only thing i would work on is ya punches or multies.....
holla at me on my shit..........links are in the sig |
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10-25-06, 01:06 PM
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illmatic
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bout time I got some feed. Good looking duke. still uppin
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