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11-12-06, 01:34 PM | #1 | |
Whys That?
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*new music from the kid* Poetic Artist- Hip Hop
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Last edited by Ysdat : 11-29-06 at 01:41 PM. |
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11-12-06, 11:57 PM | #2 | ||||
The Alien Toung
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IP:
iight, beats coming in decent so far.....intros kinda bit long....
not feelin the hook...kinda sound like mugs from cypriss hill.... ur verse is a bit low...and quality kinda muffled....flows nice...kinda hard to hear what ur saying, but i like the message from what im hearing...hooks still ehhh....libs r nice here...lol slave ship line was kinda tupacish...delevery an't real strong...u should switch something up once in a while, cuz it seems repititivesomething to keep ppls attention nah mean? not a bad track tho
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11-15-06, 02:07 PM | #3 | |
is back...
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IP:
intro needs to have something going on in it... or it doesn't work...
the hook is weak... just the way it was put together... verse... a little low not a big deal... as far as content... it was pretty upfront and noticable... as well as abused by millions of people... not your fault it is what it is... I would rethink the hook basically... that's all... not a bad joint... |
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11-15-06, 02:30 PM | #4 | ||
Duce I Rae
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IP:
the hook is way to repetive but your flow is decent but you sound very mono toned... production is decent.. keep doing your thing.
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