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11-21-06, 03:28 AM
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"Who I'm Is"... RV's HOTTEST OUT THE SOUTH!!!
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www.myspace.com/blayboymusic www.soundclick.com/blayboy on the T.I. "Rubberband Man" beat... ya boy HURTIN the competition http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237226 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237310
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11-21-06, 02:30 PM
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Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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flow was straight fell off in some places
deff improvin
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11-21-06, 02:38 PM
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The Most Feared Gang!
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IP:
Yeah we already know this beat is crack.....lookin fward to ya flow...I feel ya swag u got a nice swag....like ya hoook..but u go a lil high in there....maybe add more dubbs...vocals clear dope shit..flow is a lil off sometimes...but that's all good u got that south shit..delivery and swag is what u about...shuda mixed the hook diff and the 2nd hook seems its less dubbed then the actual verse jus a few lil things other than that id bump it..keep grillin
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11-22-06, 02:45 AM
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preciate the feed yall... upppppppppppppppin
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11-22-06, 07:56 PM
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Gone
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Yo For Some Reason I Love This Beat...Ya Flow Was Kinda Off Point At Times Lyrics Ahh Stop Using Boy I Hate When People Do That But Overall Song Was Ok
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11-22-06, 08:37 PM
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IP:
this is one of my favorite beats.............
hook is pretty well put together..... the verses... lacked a consistent flow.... fell off a few times... but... you put it down.... i see what P was sayin bout the swag... but... King of the South???? i dont know bout all that there pimpin...
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11-22-06, 09:04 PM
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I see dumb people
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IP:
yea, you def elevated. Shit was pretty coo. But lose the ego, when i peep that takes a lot away from it with your ego you got going. It'll only hurt you in the long run, can't help you. Good to have confidence, but yea.... coo shit tho. pc
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11-23-06, 04:06 AM
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-BTR-
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IP:
alright aint heard you for a while. we need to get back on a track
hook - pretty cool like the energy. pretty clever i like your energy on this first verse. flow is on point. dont really fall off anywhere. nothing that stood out lyrically. quality definitely got better like this verse a lot better. cool flakin line. flow is a lil touchy in the middle of this verse though. you have gotten a lot better though overall good job. jus fix that second verse in the middle. flow kinda falls off |
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11-23-06, 12:36 PM
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Addicted
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IP:
aight beat is coo delivery to me is ehh dubs need to be lowered n shit....a lil eq would make it sound nice....flow is cool off in sum spots......call you gaterade? ya flow is off n sum spots hookl sounds like your verse...........second verse sounds like the first verse overalll this wass aight needs some polishing it wuld be str8 rtf
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11-23-06, 01:24 PM
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I'm Talented.Period.
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IP:
like the beat...
swagger is fitting lyrics left a lil to be desired flow was good tho pretty decent dawg 1 |
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11-24-06, 02:36 AM
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Is F'in Bored
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IP:
I had to do it because i seriously hate the south rap style...and i can't help notice that you've got who i'm is and who i be as 2 different songs lmao
Chorus is ok. I like your sway son... 33 what saaaaaayyyyy.... streets hungry time to say grace....lmao You like the word boy alot huh...... whew second verse was kind of...ehhh Overall song was ok. I like the beat alot. wish i had it i'd rip it to pieces with you....but i don't so eh. Vocals were alright nothing special, quality was good. Shit better than mine but who's isn't right? 8/10
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