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Old 12-03-06, 09:42 AM   #1
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13. Format (1-0) vs 14. Stanza (8-10)

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Old 12-03-06, 10:16 PM   #2
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............................checkin In Im on a Ball I Had a good week last week lol ......So lets Go
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Old 12-05-06, 01:23 PM   #3
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Originally Posted by Stanza
............................checkin In Im on a Ball I Had a good week last week lol ......So lets Go

your a homo gay fuck. lovin male dick, don't deny it's true
on a ball? nah, more like a couple of balls are on you
i woke up early yesterday. peeped rapverse 'n the rhymes
checked this battle, 'n mistook your whack record for the time
'n your clothes, wow, no wonder with girls you don't revel
your gettin nun..prob cos your dress sense is on that level
sometimes peeps think your female. dude your life's a failure
so forget the pen, just take the pad..'n apply it to your genitalia
your fists are mad weak, but if your punches start smashin
then i'll hit you with a counter strike that'll have the game crashin
i'm outtie. ya whack. you shoulda picked up on the main signs
so yea dude, i've gotta jet..i don't wanna see your plane lines.
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Old 12-06-06, 11:37 PM   #4
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6-3 in over 2 years? damn you suck nuts.



Your obsessed with cock and buttplugs I can see from ya Lyrics
Your Actions Speak Louder than words.....Too bad noones hearing it
The whole game is spitting..im drollin while u jus sit in a drought
1 win isnt your rec...is the people who pay a penny for your thoughts
Nigga Man-up And stop drinkin that piss that you think is bicardi
You think your gonna win?...watch this kid get played like a houseparty
in this league man your constantly gettin stepped on like a door mat
Stop talkin bout yo kind bcuz we all know bout You posin For-Mat
I would let yo give me some advice ...but id rather hender your blessin
You sound so mad Format......Oh I See ......Your just PMsin
Yor always gay this and gay that and suck Deez and blow dat
the zero in ya rec reps your money stats ...No Stax!!!
I Dont lie when I say today I saw ya verse & I thought that RV had shitted
People who reading it are like vegetarians and meat
.....They just dont get it
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Old 12-07-06, 01:52 AM   #5
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your a homo gay fuck. lovin male dick, don't deny it's true
on a ball? nah, more like a couple of balls are on you
sometimes peeps think your female. dude your life's a failure
so forget the pen, just take the pad..'n apply it to your genitalia
i'm outtie. ya whack. you shoulda picked up on the main signs
so yea dude, i've gotta jet..i don't wanna see your plane lines.

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I Dont lie when I say today I saw ya verse & I thought that RV had shitted
People who reading it are like vegetarians and meat
.....They just dont get it

I like Formats verse better overall. Stanza jus came either way to played or jus lame.
format had tha jetline & tha pad line that i thought were cool. overall more consistant

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Old 12-07-06, 03:37 AM   #6
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your a homo gay fuck. lovin male dick, don't deny it's true
on a ball? nah, more like a couple of balls are on you
sometimes peeps think your female. dude your life's a failure
so forget the pen, just take the pad..'n apply it to your genitalia
your fists are mad weak, but if your punches start smashin
then i'll hit you with a counter strike that'll have the game crashin

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I Dont lie when I say today I saw ya verse & I thought that RV had shitted
People who reading it are like vegetarians and meat
.....They just dont get it


Format takes this battle, he had a pretty decent verse that was a lot more consistent than the verse from Stanza. Stanza, you fell off this week, a lot of your punches are worded awkwardly and some of the concepts were played. I was a bit torn as to whether or not I should quote the closer, because it is pretty played, but it was an ok flip on it I guess.

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Old 12-07-06, 08:06 AM   #7
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i GOTTA GO with format his punches were harder and his rhyme flowed better

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Old 12-07-06, 11:09 AM   #8
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I gotta go with stanza his shit was more legit to me

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Old 12-07-06, 01:09 PM   #9
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your a homo gay fuck. lovin male dick, don't deny it's true
on a ball? nah, more like a couple of balls are on you
i woke up early yesterday. peeped rapverse 'n the rhymes
checked this battle, 'n mistook your whack record for the time

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in this league man your constantly gettin stepped on like a door mat
Stop talkin bout yo kind bcuz we all know bout You posin For-Mat

V/ Format

Although the quotables make this battle appea to be even, I felt Format took this comfortably. His came consistently decent and he didn't really have any weak punches. His two quotables were solid and both made me chuckle, and the rest were pretty decent too. Stanza has been in the league a long time which is good because the LBL needs more regular battles, and he's elevated a lot since he first joined. However, I felt his wording let him down a lot in this battle and he didn't execute the concepts as well as he could. The For-Mat punch could have been dope if it was worded better but as it was it was good. This was an alright battle between two aspiring heads, and if Format keeps bringing these consistent drops he'll be a force within this league before long. Keep elevating fellas and good job here.
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Old 12-07-06, 04:14 PM   #10
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your fists are mad weak, but if your punches start smashin
then i'll hit you with a counter strike that'll have the game crashin
i'm outtie. ya whack. you shoulda picked up on the main signs
so yea dude, i've gotta jet..i don't wanna see your plane lines.

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in this league man your constantly gettin stepped on like a door mat
Stop talkin bout yo kind bcuz we all know bout You posin For-Mat

V/ Format..
Stanza had that one good bar, wasnt really feeling the other punches he had
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Old 12-07-06, 06:00 PM   #11
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4-0 Format. Fuck outta here with those shit votes K Illa and Player. Vote properly.
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Old 12-07-06, 09:35 PM   #12
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................................Damn bad week ...............
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Old 12-08-06, 04:49 PM   #13
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your a homo gay fuck. lovin male dick, don't deny it's true
on a ball? nah, more like a couple of balls are on you
^LOL
i woke up early yesterday. peeped rapverse 'n the rhymes
checked this battle, 'n mistook your whack record for the time
^ GOOD SHIT
sometimes peeps think your female. dude your life's a failure
so forget the pen, just take the pad..'n apply it to your genitalia
^GOOD WORDPLAY
i'm outtie. ya whack. you shoulda picked up on the main signs
so yea dude, i've gotta jet..i don't wanna see your plane lines.
^THAT WAS DECENT


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in this league man your constantly gettin stepped on like a door mat
Stop talkin bout yo kind bcuz we all know bout You posin For-Mat
^GOOD, I LIL PREDICTABLE BUT GOOD STILL
I Dont lie when I say today I saw ya verse & I thought that RV had shitted
People who reading it are like vegetarians and meat
.....They just dont get it
^ THAT WAS ALRIGHT


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He clearly just brought more wordplay to the table and stunned stanza I think.
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Old 12-09-06, 06:49 AM   #14
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