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Old 12-03-06, 09:41 AM   #1
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15. Sonny Dimebags (15-8) vs 16. Sir Smash'Alot (2-3)

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Old 12-03-06, 01:12 PM   #2
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check...
10 lines good?
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Old 12-07-06, 10:29 AM   #3
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Punches? You out, imma bust this dudes clout
Hes why refleccz stay around
.................................................. ..... yah dime put bags in Qs mouth
Musta had a time lapse, in the 80's you wouldn't rhyme wack
The mags off, I squirt in a bitch eye, and I beat a dime bag
Dime a silly fagget, next mag see what you really rated
After this ko, you can join my first week, and be crime affiliated
You a funny gay, we all know that sonnys lame
Its party cloudy, and today just aint a sonnys day

Ill get links soon enough did this during 3rd period cause iono if ill have time later
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Old 12-07-06, 10:16 PM   #4
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guess I wasted time in third period
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Old 12-08-06, 12:37 AM   #5
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iightttttttttttt
Yo, during this battle I'll rise from the rest, I'm takin a stand
and have Sir Smash on the keyboards, like we makin a band
Come on theres no way Sonny can lose to this rap peasant
got upset once last week,and now S. is my anti-depressant
Cuz my flows will leave this dudes rhymebook with a superb tear
this cats got writer's block, and I'ma make him bite the curb there
Be aware I could hit you so fast,dat there's no time for yellin
Sonny will put a dot to finish Sir off, like doing proper spellin
Not to say your verse was foul,but sum lines u shud abandon
Smash didnt throw in the white towel, he shot it out a cannon
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Old 12-08-06, 09:45 AM   #6
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Punches? You out, imma bust this dudes clout
Hes why refleccz stay around
.................................................. ..... yah dime put bags in Qs mouth
Perfect opener to start a battle.

Musta had a time lapse, in the 80's you wouldn't rhyme wack
The mags off, I squirt in a bitch eye, and I beat a dime bag
Dont get this line. started off good for me just didnt end it right

Dime a silly fagget, next mag see what you really rated
After this ko, you can join my first week, and be crime affiliated
I dont feel like lookin up your first week so ima just guess this was a witty line

You a funny gay, we all know that sonnys lame
Its party cloudy, and today just aint a sonnys day
Good solid closer to end out an overall solid verse


Yo, during this battle I'll rise from the rest, I'm takin a stand
and have Sir Smash on the keyboards, like we makin a band
ok line, couldve been a lot better

Come on theres no way Sonny can lose to this rap peasant
got upset once last week,and now S. is my anti-depressant
terrible line. off par with everything else

Cuz my flows will leave this dudes rhymebook with a superb tear
this cats got writer's block, and I'ma make him bite the curb there
aight punch wasnt really hitting though

Be aware I could hit you so fast,dat there's no time for yellin
Sonny will put a dot to finish Sir off, like doing proper spellin
Nice line. couldve worded it differently but it still works good

Not to say your verse was foul,but sum lines u shud abandon
Smash didnt throw in the white towel, he shot it out a cannon
Beautiful closer to end out the verse

Best lines was smashes opener and sonnys closer
Good battle. it was a close one to call but smash was a lil more consistant
v/smash
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Old 12-08-06, 10:12 AM   #7
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smash


You a funny gay, we all know that sonnys lame
Its party cloudy, and today just aint a sonnys day

vs

dimebags

Yo, during this battle I'll rise from the rest, I'm takin a stand
and have Sir Smash on the keyboards, like we makin a band

Be aware I could hit you so fast,dat there's no time for yellin
Sonny will put a dot to finish Sir off, like doing proper spellin



close battle...smash came aight some played shit ...but sonny had more quotables and i felt all his punches more

vote-sonny dimebags
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Old 12-08-06, 01:30 PM   #8
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You a funny gay, we all know that sonnys lame
Its party cloudy, and today just aint a sonnys day

vs

Yo, during this battle I'll rise from the rest, I'm takin a stand
and have Sir Smash on the keyboards, like we makin a band

I didnt like to much from either of you guys... you both could have come alot more consistant but since you guys are tied with quotables im gunna have to give it to sunny for his verse being slightly more consistant.

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Old 12-09-06, 06:48 AM   #9
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Old 12-09-06, 09:04 AM   #10
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Old 12-09-06, 11:01 AM   #11
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You a funny gay, we all know that sonnys lame
Its party cloudy, and today just aint a sonnys day

vs.

Come on theres no way Sonny can lose to this rap peasant
got upset once last week,and now S. is my anti-depressant

sonny got this. sir dint drop good. his quotable was aight. weird wordin tho. sonny dropped better. better style n everything. he got this.

v/ sonny dimebags
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Old 12-10-06, 11:21 AM   #13
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Sonny Dimebags wins 3-1.

Sonny Dimebags wins (16-8)
Sir Smash'Alot loses (2-4)
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