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YUp produced by nigga Triple N..this was jus real talk about how Ive advanced...and Yep I did do this in one take from the first verse 2 the end all in one take..i ain't braggin im jus saying this beat had me in the mufuckin mood u dig shit is fiya..holla at the kid..1

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Word man.....I'm feeling the beat like a mutha man. Your swag works great with this man. I like what you're saying here man. This is some real shit man. Flow is dope as usual. Only thing I would change up would be the hook. I just wasn't feeling it that much. A little to simple for me, but the rest is crack for real man. This shit's tight man.....lol


Good shit

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Ha thanks fam..yeah hook wasnt rlly menna be a hook u know..it' wwas like to accomodate the sample and just calm it down there..and tell peoples str8 up

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No doubt you definately elevated you can be the new success story for any up and coming artisit on some go chk prah's ole shit vs his new shit .......Beat is crack on this ya presence is alot better here then the spl track i heard the hook was eh i feel with whatu said above more like a compliment to the shit but definately some hotness......

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yessur thanks alot famm

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beat is hot

This track has the potential to be a Prah anthem...but it lacks crisp quality and a meticulous hook

Keep ur verses...and redo the hook...I think this could be the track that we think about when we think PRAH, as ur accepting ur Billboard Music Award, of course.


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haha thanks fo that..yeah i think i might do it like the hook I was jus tryna u know compliment the sample and conjurgate with that but i think i may re do it into a ful hook ya dig as for billboard YESSUR ima collect in a fitted, white tee and jeans lol..never gon b sellin out ya diggggg only shows and stores thanks for feed

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beat is really nice but the sample is really low
flow was cool throughout yea you should re record this your a little too loud in come places btu this was a nice track


btw you asked whats up with me and pit bulls in another thread
i volunteer at a pit bull rescue i take in pit bulls thet no one wants i own a pitbull that i compete in weight pull with and i breed pit bulls

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WHOA!!my nigga I jus gave u this beat like two, three days ago lmao....dayum u work fast son...yea son u did my beat justice fo real son...loved the verse....yea ya hook coulda been stronger...really if u had layered it better an put a nice trail echo on it...it woulda been fine...lyrics, flow, an delivery is sum of ya best shit...however I gotta admit its hard to accurately critique cuz I am so impressed with this beat I made lol...def props on the shoutouts & da props on this fam....damn u 1 taked it too? this is sum nice shit fam for real...ya voice really goes wit the beat....its tight fo real, anyways da kid got plenty more beats in the stash kid so holla if u need sum more hype yet smoothe backdrops.....1

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I'm feelin this, I was gonna hit this beat but i decided not to. but word trip did a dope job wit the beat. anyway I love how ya voice sounds on this. layed back just spittin. I'm feelin what you sayin...you just blowin up on this beat. Your emotion is hot on it. overall a hot track prahject, keep it up man.

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thanks famm n yeah no doubt it gotta go down again

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first off, shovel man was hot. sorry i just liked that track, had to say it

ok beat here comes in nice. like the trumpets n shit in the background. got my head noddin already, shit lyrics is nice. "put it all together n now ima mc" crack mayne. flows on point as always. "stopped sellin shrooms but i gotta give crack to them" delivery gettin more hype everytime i listen to your shit. adlibs is better now. before there were too many and a bit too loud, shits perfect now. damn these lyrics is deep. some emotional ish right here. dayum, this tracks crazy prah. only 2 verses? damn i hate you lol

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This beat is hard as hell..
Im feelin the track..
The sample could be a tad bit higher but I aint complainin
Shit is nice and subtle.. Your flow could've been a lil bit smoother in the 2nd verse..
But you said it was all one take, Im pretty positive if you would've went over that part it would've came out better.
This is a nice track for an album.
I overall like it my nig.

Trip hit me up with a beat too, whats really good?!

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Thanks yall..upppin..

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