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should be the second track. thanks for all comments.

HHaha another remix..lemme peep this shit...

Flow is nice, delivery hot..presence dope...lool multis hot lyrics decent.."special K" like the cereal box rofl...yeah shit is hot ..."push yo brain2 the left, get ure mind right" some hot lines..BAAAAAAAAALIN lol shuda said it...playin..yeah this shit hot..keep doing what u do my nig..1

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word?? thanks alot. when you gonna post our track ninja

Aiigh, I like the beat of course
lmao @ the BALLIN ! THE Beginning
So far hot lines all through
lol @ how weak that first gun shot sounded
nice flow all through this so far
the Air Bud line was nuts, my nig.
It sounds like Im hearin bit of a Philly Style in there
its a good thing..
oh, thats the end.. this shit was hard dog.. a perfect mixtape track
holla

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Personally i dislike Jim Jones..the beat is fiya fa sure i just hate his track cuz you aint even hear his verse through all the wack adlibs. but word you spittin flames duke. Hot emotion through the fuckin track. Deadly lyrics, kept me posted. overall a pretty dope track man.

rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=238838

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^^pHase my dude it's already posted..

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Wats gud Phase..Hurd u in the Renegade Competition

This was a nice Track man, Flow was mad cocky..This beat is ill but mad played but its kl..Presence is Ill, Delivery is sick..

This was a Sick track keep it up man

Return The Feed 'Inner Homeland'

(if u like it get at me for a Collab man)

B

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O no, not this beat again!!!!


lol

I honestly think u cud cut the talk at the start and come in with the flow


like the flow with the multis here


solid



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yea this shit is played but ya did it well ....swag was doin it multis was on point .....u need bigger gunshot effects lol but as long as u dont jim jones smell me nigga we good aight fam holla at me rtf.......

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Word.....been wanting to peep this for a minute, just never did.


Lyrics are nice on this man. Beat's kinda played out.....I think Jim Jones could be thanked for that....lol. Anyway, flow was nice on this too. Your presence is pretty hot man. Only thing I could think of you working on is maybe your breath control cause it sounded like you were taking some pretty big breaths and pretty often. Also, you slurred a few words from time to time which is usually cause of breath control. Shit was nice though man.......we should get up on a track


I actually lost your AIM though. I think it was something like Pdotmoney or something like that. But yeah, hit me up at wdywdsd

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u got a sc? some reason that track wont load for me

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