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04-04-07, 06:37 PM
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I'm Talented.Period.
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"Toppin' Levies"...new banga...holla
IP:
http://www.soundclick.com/qakaprox
^Click on "Toppin' Levies" Beat: Swollen Drumz Hook: Tha Q...lyrics provided here Verses: 1-3, Q Concept: I'm stuck on this braggadocio mode...this one is a banga, IMO Holla 1 Hook: I drop heavy.........call me L-A weight loss A hot Chevy...to the core I'm a vet, uh I top levies, flood the game with steak sauce For all the beef y'all bring y'all will eat raw http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240728 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=241039 |
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04-04-07, 06:50 PM
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The Most Feared Gang!
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IP:
Aight yo what up Q..It's been a minute..let's break this down..
Beat is cool, not my type of thing you dig, I like you're delivery on this...and multis are cool but flow seems to fall off in some bits.. Hook is decent.. lyrics aren't too special.. keep doin u
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04-04-07, 09:04 PM
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I'm Talented.Period.
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IP:
Delivery is what I was focusin on with this track...
preciate feed 1 |
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04-05-07, 01:04 PM
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The Saviour
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IP:
Q, that Spit The Jag song is fuckin HAWT. Off the RV mixtape it's the only track that's stayed on my comp.
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04-05-07, 01:12 PM
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I'm Talented.Period.
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IP:
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thank u bruh...b ut yo, the RV mixtape is out already? And my song is on it? hmm |
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04-05-07, 02:29 PM
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The Saviour
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IP:
Nah, theres a voting section that I got invited to contribute to.
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04-05-07, 02:38 PM
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I'm Talented.Period.
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IP:
^^oh...aiight
umm...could you give me a sneak peek of the voting process? lol |
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04-05-07, 02:44 PM
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The Alien Toung
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IP:
ha, wierd name, beats illy man............
flows on, like the hook....good stuff man...got u some metas n shit in their eh ? ha, good stuff man...that multi shit their is nutso, good stuff
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04-05-07, 03:06 PM
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New to RV
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IP:
This was pretty nice man. You had some wicked meta's in here. I really liked your rhyme scheme, the way you interpreted it to flow dope as fuck, ahh. Sweeet. You started spittin fast as hell to in the second verse, that was crazy. Cause you got every last syllable out of each word. Lyrically I liked what your sayin. Lol. It's some good shit. Mad me laugh a few times, too. Btw, the beats raw as fuck. I would'nt mind throwin some lyrics on a beat like that.
Overall, I liked it, alot. Definatly a song I'd add to my playlist. Keep it up bro. Rtf, http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=241113 Thanks dawg. |
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04-05-07, 10:16 PM
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I don't lose
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IP:
i like the first verse....i like the hook...the second verse is too jammed up and crowded....the third verse is like a mix of the two....i like the song dont get me wrong, but its not as good as the other stuff youve been puttin out lately....up it a lil.....the beat is nice....i like it......you know what to do....wobble wobble
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dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead  |
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