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05-13-07, 06:51 PM
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I'm Talented.Period.
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Y'all have heard my tracks before, but you NEED to hear this one
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05-13-07, 07:51 PM
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Whys That?
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IP:
You should punch, end a your verse your flow is fucked up, when you double time it it starts sounding forced.
Apart from that, this is real, which cant be knocked. damn you allmost thirty?! anyway, cool track. |
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05-13-07, 08:01 PM
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I'm Talented.Period.
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End of which verse?
but yea...I'm jus doin it up real style 1 |
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05-13-07, 08:03 PM
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I have a lot to learn...
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IP:
Pretty cool... One thing I noticed though, the part at the end where you're just sort of saying random things seems a bit unnecessary, or unnecessarily long or something.
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05-13-07, 08:07 PM
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I'm Talented.Period.
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^^^well...it's habit LOL |
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05-13-07, 08:05 PM
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I'm Talented.Period.
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P.S. The 2nd verse when I double time it...I rush it like that on purpose
Im basically spitting 15-20 syllables in 1 line...tryna sound frantic...frenetic... So, when it comes to the lyrics...I'm sacrificing flow there... on purpose |
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