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Old 10-28-08, 10:26 AM   #1
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i thought id throw this up as a last ditch attepmt to get some more love or hate though i doubt most of you will do either.
its my first song off of my up commig album....
its a song i wrote a while ago, but just recorded up in the studio...been mixng for a week, so i feel its time to get some other ears on it, tell me what yall think.

Sunday Morning - http://www.zshare.net/audio/501173913508dee9/


now stop being bitches and give me an opinion on this either way
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Old 10-28-08, 05:00 PM   #2
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quality is illy lyrics is str8 chick nice touch beat is def story vibe like dawg shoulda got me on it lol
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Old 10-28-08, 06:05 PM   #3
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girl on the song sounds like the girl that sang on Ems old tracks.... i dont have headphones so i cant even comment on the quality that well..... her solo part is deso but i think shes singing too much without any real lyrics.....and too many different tracks....
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Old 10-29-08, 02:10 AM   #4
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Dope Track.Damn homie I didnt even know you was in Maryland. Laurel at that. Just came back from a show out their. Rockin da stage and shit. But word on the track. Dope shit fam.
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Old 10-29-08, 12:40 PM   #5
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thanks guys...yea im from laurel...right now im up in salisbury for college....
but thanks for the feed...n fux...the last part was just like an uh track hence all the diff angles i wanted with the voice was just suposed to be freelance pain like a real blues song....this was my blues hangover rap crossover....but word i respect yalls opinions thanks
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dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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Old 10-29-08, 08:33 PM   #6
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It sucks.





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Old 10-29-08, 09:35 PM   #7
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hey man some people are gon like it some wont....thats how art is...so if you really dont like it than thats cool, i would like to pick your brain on why tho, so maybe if their are improvements to be made in my control i could work on it
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dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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Old 10-29-08, 10:22 PM   #8
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sounds pretty good dude...keep it up.
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