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03-05-03, 10:59 AM
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for u pussies
IP:
ya imma wear protection/
ur a pussy with a yeast infection/ thats not it tho, u got the whole collection/ that two for one sale/ u gots the STD/ the HIV/ jus buy one and get one free/ bitch iv seen u at work/ u work of them poles/ wit all them other hoes/ just stripin of cloth/ fuckin every nigga that gets in ur way/ even if their gay/ still on sale... |
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03-05-03, 11:36 AM
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Got More Meds Than Pfizer
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that was really bad.. ya need some serious elevatin'.... longer lines, more complexity (lyrically, and in the rhyme), up the vocab a-li'l...
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03-05-03, 01:10 PM
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IP:
Oye Cuba my mang.......OK for a first time.....U have to work on making the words flow better and maybe alittle more content.....Try posting in the cypher section and work on your skills pana.......Holla
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03-06-03, 06:48 PM
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IP:
work on ya flow period
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