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Old 03-17-03, 11:38 PM   #1
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"enigmatic"

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Im enigmatic, question-addict, mix-fact-static-with-sporatic/
thoughts and lies, I caterize/
rhymes in half and laugh as I murder this batch of raps/
faster then attacks from cats that shoot off gats at laxed tax/ payers, call me the mayor, Im more burnt out then the holes in the ozone layer/
lightsabre, my pen glows with flavor/
lyrical raper, cant save this paper/
when I go nuts and attach my nuts to my face with a stapler/ then try to fly like the caped crusader/
malevolent, parasitic, crotch crickets/
burn my dick as I try to earn my shit/
feel what I kick/
when challenged, I cower in fear/
cuz Ive only battled the mirror/
and Im o and 1500/
thats it, Im done with/
Im bullshit/
no q's and supposedly Im enigmatic?

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Old 03-17-03, 11:40 PM   #2
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I like yhat shit. nice vocab and wordplay. keep postin
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Old 03-18-03, 12:11 AM   #3
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c'mon send me some critique
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Old 03-18-03, 01:40 AM   #4
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i liked it this line..
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more burnt out then the holes in the ozone layer/
lightsabre, my pen glows with flavor/
lyrical raper, cant save this paper/

keep rhymin...
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Old 03-18-03, 12:42 PM   #5
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yo, shit was fuckin' ill... I was feelin' it through-out.. multis were some of the best I've seen here.. you had a topic.. kinda.. it flowed for the most part all the way, uppin' this shit..
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Old 03-18-03, 01:34 PM   #6
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Man... who the fuck are you? Another dick ryder, tryin' to start some shit to make a name for yourself. Son, don't write a check you can't cash. You don't know the game dunny.
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Old 03-18-03, 01:39 PM   #7
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shut up bitch.. it's jus a rhyme, the title happened to be your name...
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Old 03-18-03, 01:59 PM   #8
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.Damn.

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So i'm a bitch now... just wait.
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Old 03-18-03, 02:31 PM   #9
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hahahaha... just wait.. like that's supposed to be threatning or somethin'... I don't give a fuck about you...
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Old 03-18-03, 03:02 PM   #10
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Nah kid... I ain't say it's a threat. I just said wait... see the shit I got for you son.
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Old 03-19-03, 08:41 PM   #11
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I thought it was pretty tight too just that you need to gather your thoughts more and not have such random thoughts thrown around in there... lol... I can't say you didn't stay on topic b/c I didn't know what the topic really was besides "enigmatic" so keep spittin... Good drop

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