First post yall, nice an short so yall cant complain bout' reading the newbies long piece lol


I am the one they call The Original Supernatural//
Showing "rappers" of fiction that im all factual//
I defeat cats with ease like im using lyrical wizardry//
Sneaking up on fools with pure perfected sorcery//
I rain true with preposterous cruelty and evil terror//
Think you clever, well say hello to my trial and error//
I mix-and-blend, a dangerous opponent, I set-trends//
I wipe out all challengers so please "phone a friend"//
You and your 'dog' versus the "fire heater for hire"//
Words so hot even my tongues starting to perspire//
Scribed in flames I show you true fully formed detail//
My heat intensity grows, you a turtle hiding in your shell//
I cut clean your 'dogs' tail without fail I always prevail//
How’s that for lyrical "DE-TAIL"//

Peace fam'

that was cool... that was good for a first post... keep rhymin

This was aight...needs some elevation, but that will be found in time...keep spittin shit...not bad..

P.e.a.c.e.

that shit was pretty hott.....keep spittin rhymes.....O~N~E

not bad. you deffintly sould stick around and elevate, u got a solid talent. stay up and return the favor.

peace

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the one that watches the watchmen:

I cut clean your 'dogs' tail without fail I always prevail//
How’s that for lyrical "DE-TAIL"//

Creative...Elevation's a step beyond Evasive. Keep on keepin' on.