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My first time
IP:
Yo check it....
This is my first time rappin// take this time to see what happins// hope I do good// and get a good review// i heard this s* is harsh on the new// take this time for you to hear my s*// god I hope I don't embarrasse me on this// it's hard to come up with rhymes to pleasure the living// hope you like what'cha hearing// my words has these feeling// when you sitting here reading// HA b* my words are conceiving// i'm about to give up ya'll and leaving ya'll with the suspense of my next song// OH MY F*N GOD what am i doing// this song f*n sucked i need improving// peace |
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IP:
um....rap about something....yo nigga. you just insulted urself alot. it wouldnt have been so bad if you rapped about ANYTHING. practice.
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IP:
whats with the not swearing/swearing thing
if u aint gonna swear then dont if u are then write the word that was iight for the first time though keep droppin and try usin multis peace |
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IP:
yeah i agree dog,
if you really want to rap - p-r-a-c-t-i-c-e.... stay up though. peace. |
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IP:
Thanks dogg.. I will P-R-A-C-T-I-C-E.. if you have any tips for me to improve I will greatly appreciate it.
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