Who Is God I Ask, To Those Who Get Fucked And Trashed,
Stuck In the Clash, Of Gods Almighty War Against Satan,
I Cringe While Im Waitin, For The Answer Of Serenity,
While The Cancer Burns Within Me, And Satans Grip Holds Tight,
You Makin Mistakes That I Might, The Holy Wrath Burns Bright,
Symbols To Indepth To De-Code, Many Have Wept On The Road,
Between Heaven And Hell, Children Die Everyday Between 7 and 12,
I'll Level The Bell, In A Futile Attempt To Restore Heaven Itself,
But Is That Really What I Want, Is That Even The Truth,
Or Was Jesus Just A Tool Of Satan, Ensuring We'd All Be Moved,
I Crawl When Im Soothed, By The Sweet Voice Of A Siren,
I'm Poised Towards The Cryin, Of The Innocent And Guilty,
Its Only Punishment For The Fealty, Those Who Swore Allegiance,
To God And His Preachin, Dont Talk While Im Speakin,
I Never Swore Allegiance To God, The Vile Are Sneakin,
So Why Should I Base My Life Under His Rules, I'll Plunder His Pools,
And Run Asunder These Fools, That Follow Him As If He Were Not Cruel...

What Are You Thinkin About...?

are u dissin god or just wondering about life, nice flow anyway

Not all that great...rhyme scheme was very off balance...flow was straight though...

Keep at it...

P.e.a.c.e.

not dissin god...

and my rhyme scheme...? whats wrong with it...?

maN I THINK it wus good namean but sounds like u dissin god ....anywayz keep writing

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I love relgious peices.. (tha name should give it away) Nice work fo real. OoNnEe Luh