Verses due tonight (saturday)
3-0 KO or 5 votes wins
5-10 bars
no d/r hater votes

lets do dis

Lyrikil use this one...there was dificulties with the other oen so we battlin in here

You a 'feeble' lad, aint no reason for ya to spit ya 'pathetic' rhymes at me, you 'vulnerable' with your 'powerless' 'ungaurded' shit dat nobody wanna see//
Your rhymes are 'anemic' 'asthenic' and 'adynamic', totally 'engulfed' by your own stupidity, hell they will always be 'incapacitated'//
Its pitiful how 'defenseless' and 'helpless' you are, you like a 'unprotected' pussy, totally 'exposed', Can I say you 'puny' and 'scrawny'?//
I should call you 'glass' cuz you 'fragile' and i can 'see right through you', Ya 'drained' and 'exhausted' cuz my crew can 'see through you' too//
You 'dilute' rap your lyriks are so 'decripit', 'Dehibilitated' should be ya nickname cuz your so 'enervated'//
Against me your 'helpless' and your jus 'forceless', your skills are 'shoddy' and 'flimsy', you came 'weakly' and i made ya look 'wimpy'//
Lyrikil i jus killed any chance of you bein 'mystique', so ya betta 'critique' ya 'technique' before ya 'speak' and begin a losing 'streak'//

Descriptions and definitions
1st bar~~inside the ' and ' are synonyms for weak
2nd bar~~inside ' and ' are more synonyms for weak
3rd bar~~more for weak
4th bar~~fragile is weak and a term for glass and u can see rite through glass and then drained and exhausted are more for weak
5th bar~~inside ' and ' are more things for weak
6th bar~~more ways to say weak
7th bar~~mystique-mysterious, critique-work on, technique-his style


Good luck man

uppin for this foo

uppin again...remember midnight tonite (est. time)

yo what the fuck i no i didnt just waste this verse on your ass...we both agreed we had to drop by saturday midnight (est time)....but to let u have a chance i will let u keep prewritin your shit like i no your doin and come at me....just hurry the hell up

WTF yo bitch post up

did u use a thesaurus to write this whole rhyme.. lol.. nah just joking, I'll vote if this kid shows...

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nah no thesauras here.....i have increased my vocab alot by reading through dictionaries and thesaurases before but i jus used those off top of my head...i keyed this shit i just remembered them from earlier that day becuz i had jus read alot of em anyway this kid betta hurry up

nice shit homie ill vote wen the other duke posts but yo can u plz vote on KOKIENA vs CON and ILLMATIX VS COn we really need votes thnx homie

yo i think this is a no show this man aint showin he scured