i hate myself. i'm happiest with you. i forever doubt my words, i can believe my thoughts, but will you? i could tell you everything, that i've ever felt, would you really listen, it wouldn't help. i've given up on me, i don't know who i am, i've written all my dreams, i'm going to drop my pen. forgive me if i change, love me no matter what, if i die before i wake, promise to never give up. we have flaws, its probably best we never showed them, this is my eternal hello to you, our poem.




peace

It was short....But hot...But wat U tryin' to say? U ain't writin' anymore? I hope that's not it....But I liked tha rhymin' in this...And tha emotions could be felt...It was deep....Keep it up...Peace

thas it, you out... thought you'd go out with a bang man...
Yo this was pretty short, had decent rhymes, a pretty good flow, but you could have made it a bit longer, I was feeling the concept in this, I didn't think there was enough of it though... you for real bout writting no more in this? oh wel.... peace out then....

It sucked... Cuz it was about you not writing...if it was a joke, then it would be good! But if its real...NO! Damn You! Don't leave! Bastid!