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day to day
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struggle again to get outta bed//
hit the 9 to 5 or no one get's fed baby's momma out gettin tore up// while these goddamn bills keep pilin up incorrect, no respect at home or work, i wanna defect// but the thought of my daughter keeps my rejected ass in chikitty -check car still busted, so ima have to bus-it, 3 mile ride// sittin next to these ruffians how can it be, the boss is hatin on me// for bein 3 minutes late but why can't he see been bustin my ass for so long at this plant// i wanna get out of this town but i can't mom and pop can't help with shit// he's always drunk and she's always sick |
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Nice lil spit.
Basically it's a real life spit. I like it though. Keep em comin.. One Hundred.. |
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the same thing ya manup ahead said I could'nt say it better thats just real shit....happens to everybody at some point in time!!!!
keep spittin tho *Holler~ |
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Damn well I got this homeboy that can relate to that shit... It reminded me of his life... cause well that's his problems.... nice real life piece.... OoNnEe
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thanks .....uppity up up
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ups
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.BeTteR ThAn YoO!.
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Yeah man its aiight, basic but to the point, I just got some advice for ya man, stop fucken cloggin up Open Mic, you got like 6 pieces on the front page, what the fuck is that?? You're wasting space for other people to get replies and its just not wanted man, sure you can ^^up your pieces but not fucken every piece you ever done at the same time....
Peace Out Yo!!!! |
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They rhyme itself is basic but ya just tellin it as it is. Simple flow and vocab but its effective. way too short aswell u gotta add alot more to it. still will no doubt be a tight piece wit sum more work. anyway cuz RETURN THE FAVOUR check mine BANGKOK BUSINESS im fed up of replyin to every fucka on here and gettin no replies.
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