~mother~
blame my attitude on the streets//
blame my moves on the beats//
you can point your little finger but more point back at you//
so blame it on the emotions that I put you through//
I taught you the way of the world I taught you how to live//
I taught you how to fight but this was all I had to give//
I made sure that you were safe in the world you couldn't trust//
I made sure you burnt those bridges when you ran out of lust//

~child~
You took me away so many times//
From all I held dear all of my crimes//
My friends would have fun while I had to help clean//
I couldn't help but wonder how you could be so mean//
You gave me curfew's and rules that deminshed my reputation//

People made fun of me at school because you and your illiteration//

~Mother~
If that's how you feel then be on your own//
Find a way to support yourself and build your own home//
You can always come back once you realise the rules//
I will always be your mother but never your fool//
So pack your bags and be on your way//
and dont come running back at least for antoher day//
you need to learn your lesson and its going to hurt me//
but it will teach you life and sanity//

~child~
That was the fight we had the last night I ever saw her face//
and it took me years to realise no one would take her place//

some say it was a heart attack some say it was a night theif//
But I will always remember that night and how she died from grief//
It taught me a lesson just like she said//
I wish I would have returned though, before my mother was dead//
I'll try harder with my own child I'll hold them tight//
But I know everything will repeat all back to that night//

you need to learn your lesson and its going to hurt me//
but it will teach you life and sanity//

this is the truest. the hard part of being someones parent.
nice piece, a little dry, but emotionally moving and very well written. almost slow and deliberate flw to it. keep spittin, ma, you have potential. upps

ty for the reply

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hey nice one, i liked the whole thing,
but the pink text hurt my eyes tho lol

^^ thank you for replying...

i liked it it was on point, the idealism of it definately got me, good drop, im uppin this

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People gonna get slept on if they slep on me ...

well I'm not sleep....mami this was very much on point, I cant relate to like the 100th power so it sorta hit a spot ya digg but the emotion was there and so was the lyrics which makes it better keep doin whutcha do ma'
Holler...good drop ^^^