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Ghetto life
IP:
This is a mix of nas and pac kinda shit.
came out decent but u can see that i was drinken that tang while i was writen but shit is still hot as far as flow and topic lemme know what u all think! Yo listen man, This isnt what i wanna be, this is how i am// This bullshit lifestyle is all i see, Im sayin "damn"// They say life is what u make it// son listen thats fake shit// you get dealt a shitty hand, deal wid it// stand up and be a man, and youll pull through this shit// You gotta realize it. brighter dayz is on the way// You gotta stand tall and say// hook 2x yea i live the ghetto life// but im gonna make it through the pain// ima make it through the strife// Ima go insane// If I dont start doin right // Ima start workin the day. sleepin the night// Im not doin this cuz of the life i live but in spite// Im do this cuz i believe that i can achieve// This time ima stay like a man, i aint gonna leave// Stand tall, talk it out, and juss breath// Dont shout, juss stand there and concieve// hook 2x yea i live the ghetto life// but im gonna make it through the pain// ima make it through the strife// Ima go insane// If I dont start doin right // Man life gets hard sometimes// Find your way of dealin wid frustration// Whether it be juss writen rhymes// or staight up masturbation// or through conversation// or the music on the radio station// or if ya have to smoke some haze// all im sayin is betta dayz are on the way// so calm down, and have it like bk// hook 2x yea i live the ghetto life// but im gonna make it through the pain// ima make it through the strife// Ima go insane// If I dont start doin right // |
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ight
IP:
ight this is my opinion i wasnt really feelin this cause tha name of this ghetto life but u really wont talkin bout how ur life is ghetto from what i saw....u were just sayin stay strong and shit like that but wont really sayin and talkin bout how life is ghetto but other than that ur flow was alright.....
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IP:
well if i changed the title to overcoming the adversity of ghetto life would that make it a better piece. The title isnt what makes the piece. U must not have understood the piece.idk. thanks for the reply though.
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