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04-07-03, 07:01 PM
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Ya Mama's Favorite
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<--Periods of the Life-->
IP:
Out the womb...Uncomfertable...Comes out...Crying
Sees Mother...Sees Father...Sucks thumb now...Relying/ Gets guidence...From elders..Some Praise...More Disapline Being good...No fun...Some days...No listening/ Behaves...But curious...Mannered...But sneakey Develops...Hobbies...Creates shit...Comes easy/ Sports...Music...Drums..Hoopin' All play...All day...Fun...Amusin'/ Gets older...Still young...Growing pains...It hurts Saturday in Streets...Sunday in church/ Boy to man...Girls to women Women to hoes...Adstanence!?...You trippin!/ Sees life...Trife times...Not so innocent Has thoughts...Writes rhymes...Jot what I'm livin' in/ Good times...Bad times...Babies born...Men die This verse shows my 'periods' in life, and words I live by/ |
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04-07-03, 07:08 PM
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IP:
Let me just say, I got the insperation fort this rhyme from this writer named Scoop Jackson. He a writer in Slam magazine and he did a story on Ricky Davis form the Cavs, and he did the whole story like that, with the periods and used one word to sum up what could be a whole sentence. And I thought it was dope so I decided to do a verse like that. Just going throgh steps in my life, yaknow. I thougt about doing a whole song but I just slimmed it down to one 16 bar verse cuz a whole song prolly be overkill. I guess I'll use it for a last verse for something.
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04-07-03, 07:10 PM
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short and sweet homie,ill sh!t.Its a diff style spit and u pulled it off pretty well.Keep postin Stay ^
-Avi |
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04-08-03, 12:24 AM
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Thanks, Av ^^^
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04-08-03, 12:36 AM
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excellent spit d-dizzle,that would sound niceon the end of a song to finish it up perfectly,i really liked it,peep my shit on open mic sometime. big propz
bismillah |
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04-08-03, 01:05 PM
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IP:
Aiight den, I'll do that. Thanks on the reply
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04-08-03, 10:09 PM
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^^^ Damn, ya'll be sleepin'
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04-09-03, 02:26 AM
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an original style in the way u spittin on this, i guess it was weird at the start but it like compressed a whole bunch of emotions, thoughts into a line which was nice.. keep spittin
peace out... |
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04-09-03, 11:08 AM
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Ya Mama's Favorite
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IP:
Thanks, pimpin' , the rest scream at cha boi
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