The light shines from above to within your heart/
The dark takes over your soul and tears it apart/
You sit back and wonder what makes you tick/
Is it your veins ventricles or your dick/
And why dont we respect the ladies?
We go out to impress them with 60 thou mercedes/
Perry Ellis is to Rocawear as BIG was to Pac/
And Kurt Cobain was to cocaine as 50 to his glock/
I write a rhyme sit back to the future/
Hate goin out at night wonderin who's gon shoot ya/
This world is full of drama and lies/
If theres any left from the class of 2000 please rise/
Our future's being killed off once every 7 minutes/
And our population is rising with bad intentions within it/
Why do the good die young?/
Why should a father cry or bury his son?/
When will the races come together as one?/
And realize all this racist bullshit is done?/
You dont see Ulysses S Grant or Robert E Lee/
Or Abraham Lincoln bein a jackass on TV/
So why are we still livin in the past in agony/
And When will see the light?/
When will our mouths jus shut and try to solve the fight/
Jus look into the future and see yourself in your children/
Try and prepare them for the future you are buildin/
Not every message has to be negative/
If you work hard at it you commit it becomes positive/
You have families members lookin down on you from above/
But you forgot about as soon as you deceased their love/
But they are with you right by your side/
Guarding you when you are sick, scared and when you want to hide/
The world is menace and it will become you/
So take what I say and learn to love you/
For the future is the light and follow it till its no more/
And steal from the rich and give to the poor/
And end all the bullshit and strife/
Next time you try and diss a girl jus think she could be your wife/
There are but only three great ones a actor once said/
You'll know it from her smile not how she performs in bed/
Take this advice open your eyes theres ya sight/
And always remember that there is the light/

the first part of this got me ... Its a good question ... why dont most men respect ladies and do they think with there dicks... yup.. I liked this piece. OoNnEe

UPPIN?? ANYONE THANKS ANGELIC

decent shit,

Our future's being killed off once every 7 minutes/
And our population is rising with bad intentions within it/

oh shit this cat got skills i read your other post and liked it and this one was even better more complex and the rhyme scheme was off the meters kid you i would say get better but if you do you'll show me up and i don't i want that so keep doin what you're doin

odd gives it
5 of 5 mics

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shut the fuck up

even if i stutter i'll still sh-sh-shit on you/ pun

dead in middle of little of little italy
little did we know that we riddle
some middle man who didn't do ditally/ pun

THANKS ODDLY ILL THE CRITIQUE IS APPRECIATED, YOUR KINDESS IS HARD TO KILL LOL...OOPS RHYMED LOL

This was refreshing..
nice to see some new ill headz..
stay active playa..

peace
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