RapVerse.com Community
 Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End RV Radio  

Go Back   RapVerse.com Community > Fresh From The Lab > Textual Releases > Poetic Scriptures
User Name
Password
FAQ Calendar Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

Reply
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
Old 04-19-03, 01:07 PM   #1
Phantasia
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
Who ever you want it to be

IP:

I never thought I would get tired of this ish, but I wanna break out. I’ve been sentenced to an eternity of oppression from a higher power with uncontrollable authority. Abuse of power breached with every word spoken. It’s enough to turn a sane man into a crazed maniac. Unable to be contained a fury rages inside my head, suppressed not being released. My body shakes with anxiety knowing its full capability. The authority confronted. No longer will I stand to be suppressed. No one rules me I am my own. Slowly my freedom is gained the abuse of power diminished with one single stand. Never will I be put down.
  Reply With Quote
Old 04-19-03, 01:09 PM   #2
Phantasia
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
IP:

I don't like what I just wrote! So if you do... Yea,okay
  Reply With Quote
Old 04-22-03, 06:50 AM   #3
~Soultress~
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
IP:

Why don't you like it?
sometimes we are our worst enemy when it comes
to writing that we ourselves do..

There was nothing at all wrong with this..
you made your opinion clear all the way thru
and you stood on topic....
the flow wasn't meant to be perfect..which gives this
more of a straight from the heart feel..

stay up

~Soul~
  Reply With Quote
Old 04-22-03, 08:46 AM   #4
Phantasia
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
IP:

I don't like anything I write even when it's my best I was just writing. I do that a lot. Anything that has emotion to it I don't like it that is all. I was trippin
  Reply With Quote
Reply


Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump



All times are GMT -4. The time now is 07:40 AM.

Powered by vBulletin.
Copyright © 2000-2004 Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.