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Old 05-03-03, 10:29 PM   #1
Buffyangellover1
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Check this out my friend wrote it but it is tight

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The World Forever turns
Check out the man I've found,
His skin tanish brown.
We love each other can't you see?
I love him, he loves me.

He shows how much he cares.
He calls me day to day to share,
How much he loves me, I can't bare.
I can see it in his stare

We love each other can't you tell?
He was there for me when i fell.
I'll love him til' the deepest sea goes dry.
This love i have, I show... I try.

Each others hearts we have to mend,
And when does our love end?
Forever deep out passion burns,
Never because the world forever turns.
By: tanisha james (12)
Dedicated to Joey
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Old 05-03-03, 10:46 PM   #2
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please tell me wut u think i would really appreciate it. thanx
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Old 05-03-03, 10:58 PM   #3
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Was pretty tight ... liken it ...

Props to her!!

Pz
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Old 05-04-03, 10:40 AM   #4
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thats tight buffyangellover1!!!-keep it up!
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Old 05-04-03, 11:39 AM   #5
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My friend wrote that not me !
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