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Old 05-04-03, 01:45 PM   #1
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my faggat -ass father,i hope he goes to hell,
but hes probaly goin to heaven,shit,o well
i sometimes wonder why he came to this world,
sometimes i wish he was wrapped up with bubble wrap and shipped straight to the dumb-shit world!!
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Old 05-04-03, 11:28 PM   #2
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Uhh that truthly Sucked
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Old 05-04-03, 11:32 PM   #3
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wow...
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Old 05-04-03, 11:58 PM   #4
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i am unbelievably amazed.. anything can be considered poetry, its art... but this... this bordered the line of being complete shit...
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Old 05-05-03, 12:24 AM   #5
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well...showed how felt but could have been better....
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Old 05-05-03, 01:07 AM   #6
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Originally posted by pHraNtiK
i am unbelievably amazed.. anything can be considered poetry, its art... but this... this bordered the line of being complete shit...


YEEEEEEEEEEP
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Old 05-05-03, 07:58 PM   #7
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..................... Riiiiiiight.
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Old 05-06-03, 05:45 PM   #8
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uhm.. just keep working on it u'll get it right
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Old 05-06-03, 08:33 PM   #9
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nice start...i like how simple it is...but here's the catch...if u make ur piece more descriptive and longer then u would feel different that u did better...

this was nice....keep droppin!
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Old 05-07-03, 12:36 AM   #10
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lol keep writing so i can keep laughing
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Old 05-07-03, 04:37 AM   #11
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that shit sounds so funny. hehe oh wellz im not larfin at his situation but i dont think he was feelin it. heheh ahahahahah.
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