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Old 05-05-03, 09:25 AM   #1
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.These Are The Days.

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I'm at the venue posin' for pictures//
Had to bless you by flowin' this scripture//
I wrote for my niggas to feel//
Try to relate, I rhyme out of hate//
For ignorance, this the naked evidence//
The case that E is in, corrupt judge//
Biased juries is given guilty decisions//
It's tough love, I feel this position is fucked up//
But necessary, I'll step to every cop and bust slugs//
When the prophet comes up from the cemetary//
I'm mentioned every hour, this here's legendary power//
Everybody fears God, especially the cowards//
Wierd guys worship statues all day//
Filling school buildings, classrooms, and hallways//
But don't learn a thing while chrome burners ring//
For dismissal of life like the missles that strike//
At targets when a hateful man marks it//
They say they wanna light the darkness//
But they fight the heartless, overprice the market//
I write this song so you niggas might respond//
With a little feedback, this little nigga need that//
Let's build, so I can chill a little, relax//
We got problems that we deal with on our kneecaps//
Long prayers in church buildings, earth's children//
Lost laying in hearse chillin', dirt spillin'//
For burial ceremonies, take the world to the grave//
Jewelry forever on me, these are the days...//
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Old 05-05-03, 10:55 AM   #2
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.ZzZzZzZz.

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Don't sleep on this joint!
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Old 05-05-03, 10:58 AM   #3
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uppin this tight peace.
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Old 05-05-03, 11:02 AM   #4
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nice flow, you could feel where the emphasis was put into the words and where the the sound popped.. str8 shit here, uppin' 4 mah boy..
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Old 05-05-03, 11:11 AM   #5
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aaaaaaaaaahahhahahah!
Armageddon, oh my god!
This is Camarac, i remember
you showed me the ropes
when i first joined here!
SHIT! Anyways, great piece
you have here, a couple of
the bars were a little short
and threw the flow a little,
nice imagery though, a few
more multi's, internals and
externals and this would be
better, but as it is, its a pretty
stand out piece, i enjoyed
reading it. Good drop 'Don.

Holla at my piece, see if ive improved!

Peace!
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