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Old 05-07-03, 07:16 PM   #1
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Question *First Spit*

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Heres my first spit.... To the beat of Ja's Emerica....

Let me do my thing as i enter the room/
I know you starin at my color gettin ready to boo/
You stereotype, I got all this hype cause im white/
but I can still rock tha mic, my flows tight/
My rhymes be ill, but not as ill as you think/
My vocabs to small/ Im not even allowed ta drink/
But look, Im still a young'n, If i heard a gunshot, i'd probably be runnin/im a puss, and the whole world knows it/ if you tryed to pick some sh!t with me i'd say go blow dick,and run./ Cause ya"ll could kick my ass no lie, if i tryed to fight back i'd get murdered and die./ The names Whytee, Whyteboyz fo'real,i know i aint black and i could get killed. But look, i can do what i want/ so F*ck ya"ll haters if you want me ta drop.

That is a peice of shit if you dont have the beat in your head. But oh well, im a beginner.
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Old 05-07-03, 09:15 PM   #2
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Whack!!!!!!!!! work on ur vocabulary and wordplay
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Old 05-08-03, 07:50 AM   #3
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i agree with bash, wack wack wack
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Old 05-08-03, 08:05 AM   #4
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wackness is the rigth word...the fuck was that..reading that polluted my mind...work on your shit dunny...wahid
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Old 05-08-03, 09:14 AM   #5
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Damn, I ain't gonna put it like everyone else did, but you gotta work on your wordplay a little. It was a good beat in the beginning, then in the end, you just meshed it all together. Keep workin' on it dunny, holla.
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Old 05-08-03, 03:35 PM   #6
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Guys I dont kno if this dude has the word WACK in his vocab!
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Old 05-08-03, 05:36 PM   #7
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yo, hes only new..
don't worry kid, everyone started off with "wackyness", you'll get better - BELIEVE ME!
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