Life is an empty book, waiting for you to fill in the details.
Sometimes life may seem wonderful like a first kiss with a loved one.
But sometimes life can seem pure useless like a bag of unpopped popcorn.
You will have happy times, and sometimes your life might seem torn.
But in the end, hapiness, love and friends, you'll have a ton.
At night you think of your successes and your fails.
Without dreams, your life is a broken boat without sails.

Sometimes it might feel like no one loves you.
But at least you'll always have two.
Now you're wondering who these two might be.
One is God, but you might disagree.
The other is your friends.
Your friendships never die, it just bends.

Life, It feels like cool mist on a hot summer day.
Life is like a cougar, it's giving you apportunitys to pounce on, but you never take risks.
Lfe is full of opportunitys, and taking them is the only way.
You're afriad to take these risks,but without them, life is no fun.

uppin for comments on what i can improve on and whats good thx

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wow..i'm really feelin thys...nice job...

Thx for replying man uppin for comments

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hey guys if ya comment of this thx and also check out my other piece i just posted, "My Love". Aight Peace out.

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I liked this one from you. I'm glad you know that God is helping you out. You may be struggling but He'll always keep you going.

thx legendary be sure to check out my other pieces peace out

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i really liked it nice flow and great topic...mad props

wow didnt think it was that good, but hey thx Eviley. uppin for replies on this and my other poems thx

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aight im out for the day peace out....

hey ive been thinkin bout makin a new poetry crew if ya interested give me a message...aight peace

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hey im back if ya lilke this thx for a comment and plz vote on my other stuff aite

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UPPIN!!!

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this reminded me of this quote:

"When you reach for the stars, you may not quite get one, but you won't come up with a handful of mud either." -Leo Burnett

...i feel that life is great but there are certain times of ups and downs.....but yeah im feelin this

nice job!

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<br><br><center>- Shiznit -
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- That's a Fact - </center>

thx shiz for commentin on all my stuff really appriciate it.

uppin for votes

-OuT-

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