Aite this ones kinda short but posterd it anyway, hope ya see my expression in it. Comment on my opther stuff if ya can. Thx ya'll and peace out.

No one knows waht it takes to be great, a super hero/
expressing myself saying rhymes, lookin in the mirror/
a superhero is not someone who has special powers, but one
who helps others with what needs to be done/
to me, helpin people out isnt a priority, on my list its fun/
bullies be hatin on children, callin em names and teasin/
to me taht aint pleasin, ya gotta pray to Jesus, for help/
yelp out into my ear, shed a tear, and grow with pride/
hopefully you'll see my real side/
i love god, and the sign of the dove/
him and rap mgiht be the only things that i love...

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Seems like you wrote this one kind of fast. I didn't like this one as much as the others but it wasn't bad. The reason I like this one is cause it just seems positive.

ya i did write it kinda fast but thx for the reply legend.

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