this is'nt my best drop, i made this a while ago

It’s only the white stuff, that makes me feel right//
That shit has me up all night, it enables me to write//
Till my hearts contrite, it’s only the white stuff that has me in parts//
It’s after affects are more scary than, sars, but it ahs my cluttered head, up in mars//
The value has me ridin in flash cars, not that it mattered, but I always have my own stash//
For-personal-use, but it’s feelin, has brought forward my date with-the-noose//
Although it has my rhymes goin-past-obtuse, but enough about the good//
What about the bad, most of the kids who abuse it, are just//
Following-a-phad, but it’s the solitary narcotic that lifts me up//
From-bein-sad, come on dawg, just give me a tad!//

Lifes all about – GETTING HIGH//
My lifes all about - GETTING HIGH//
Eveyones aim in life is – GETTING HIGH//
We all strife to – GET HIGH//

After I done 6 months in jueve, my mind started to hang loosly//
I held my true homies closely, the white stuff was pushed aside//
And I was made ot decide, which one to choose, but my mind//
Changes like-the-tide, my feelings go from depressive-to-excite//
But I knew my father was right, continue with this shit//
And become-a-cretin, it makes you increase you, fascination-wit-satan//
Has your-survival-rating, go from 1 to zero, I’m now suffernin from neurosis//
My hypothesis, can-now-confusue, the white stuff I-cant-refuse//

(HOOK X3 )

good shit dawg...

It’s only the white stuff, that makes me feel right//
That shit has me up all night, it enables me to write//

Good 1

thanx,

uppin'

And become-a-cretin, it makes you increase you, fascination-wit-satan//
Has your-survival-rating, go from 1 to zero, I’m now suffernin from neurosis//
My hypothesis, can-now-confusue, the white stuff I-cant-refus
^^ ill man, best part of tha drop
i thought it was weak at times, but it was real good at others
overall it was pretty decent, i especially liked how u talked up tha "white stuff" first then switched outlooks on it in tha second half, it was good shit dogg

ya it was good overall. Good flow and mediocre vocab. It had its ups and downs but i think it was hott.

keep spittin and plz check my opem mics out

-OuT-

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This drop was Tight

thanx,

This wasn't written awhile ago...There wasn't SARS awhile ago.

i mean't like a few weeks ago.

to em that is a while ago, cis my stuff from a few weeks ago, is probably wack compared to the shit i drop now...k?

Oh aight, I thought you meant it was a recycled flow, My b...Props..good joint


After I done 6 months in jueve, my mind started to hang loosly//
I held my true homies closely, the white stuff was pushed aside//
And I was made ot decide, which one to choose, but my mind//
Changes like-the-tide, my feelings go from depressive-to-excite//

lol, n/p dawg!

not bad.. "drugs" are "dope"... lol.. do u do audio.. holla at me in a PM....

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nah, not got to audio yet!, probably won't for a while

that sux

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i'm really self-concious 'bout the way i talk, i'm scottish and people over here(n.ireland) usually have a good laugh mocking me (sometimes jokingly, other not)