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Old 05-12-03, 10:43 PM   #1
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.:For Femcees:.

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To the Queens Of RB, and HipHop


She has her Heart On her Mind, & On the side:.
she Hopes to Fly, but even on my back shes not ON the Rise:.
becuase you should see clear with Open eyes, but her Eyes are Wide & Blind:.
Line for Line, she goes for it Time after Time, but so Confined:.

She Must Come out the Box, Out of Shock:.
Be inavative, to be On the Top:.
She's got talent, but Shes On the rocks, On the Chopping Block, Every Post she Drops:.

Steady trying to be, the next Queen Bee, Next Foxy, Next Evie E:.
But Femcee..do one thing, look in the mirror & say "I am Me":.
Then when you succeed, Props will be, all for the, instead of Eve, for showing you how to procced, in this leauge:.

Originality

Intelligents

but keep your female personna:.
dont forget who you are, and you will shorely get were you wanna:.


Yall know Rise Love the ladies...lol

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Old 05-12-03, 11:22 PM   #2
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Awe. Nice piece, great msg. Feelin that. Stay up Rise. Nice writez.
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Old 05-13-03, 09:23 AM   #3
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Thanx^^^For Tha Love ....This drop is Fo tha Femcees...
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Old 05-13-03, 11:15 AM   #4
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I think its really good....The message of the poem came hard and easily appreciate by the readers...

*sooner or later femcees will rule the hip hop world..muhahahaha* <------------- just playin!..

but anyways...glad u appreciate femcees...

much respect..

hopin to read more...
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Old 05-13-03, 07:11 PM   #5
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i really loved that keep doin what you do
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Old 05-14-03, 08:59 PM   #6
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This was awesome drop babyboi,
diggin it,

much props!!!

Pz xXx
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