I battled someone using this and I wanted to know whut other people thought.Please give me some Feedback.


THANX!!!





I'm about to swtich tha pitch with this inscription/
I'm no psychic but heres my prediction/
all your rhymes are either pre-written or bitten/
and they were pulled out your ass like a masked magician/

I'm a crazy-insane intellectual/
your a bible kissin' homosexual/
I'm a master at this textual/
your an unknown object like an extraterestrial/
I got lines longer than the trax of your intestinal/
your a novice and i'm a professinal/
bein' unable to rap leaves you unimpressionable/

No its not any good , , lol ,, juss playin , , this drop should have been longer , ,, it was an aight drop , , but u still need to elevate a lil mo

yeah am agreein wit bash, he kno what he on about...also try not to rhyme absolutey everything....youll end up getting stuck and chokin......it dont have to rhyme every second line....its the punches that count

check out ma drop http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=47844

yea that was good......but wat bash said shulda been longer


and is textual a word????

yes, textual is a word...

aite make it longer man, and in a battle, hit him hard with punches, just think of stuff and spit it at him. Snd like panther said, dont worry bout rhyming it all, it'll come together. Keep spittin, thats the only way you'll get better.

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Thanx guys!