Short key

My pen is leaking of ink, sinking deep in the page as the rage is released//
I seize to capture the beat, the feat is lost to the peace thats left incomplete//
I piece the words in my head, instead of writing of feelings I keep stealing my thoughts//
Reminded of shots, all the squads Ive forgot, until my pen is a memory, blank from blood clots//
I drop the pen in the trash, grab a marker of sort and distort the distractions, I'm tired of this rappin//
A label attraction? When the fuck will it happen? Its too late for school, I can't dual with fractions//
My faction has failed, I cant excell in the game, I blame the world for my wrong, they never let me belong//
My parents foregone, they wouldnt wait on my songs, this rap shits the only one that ever kept me along//
I was drawn to money, now its funny you see, I only did it for fame, its what my parents would think was expected of me//
A Great Emcee, the best to ever exist, and to think I believed em... then with a moment of grief, they started deceivin//
I was achievin a rap, but not in lyrical arts, the heart of the town, people treated me fair, and looked with blank stares//
You see I never was born, my mother answered her prayers, I died because her affairs... before I was born, I was killed without care//
My rhymes unborn, storing age in the trash, my age was slashed short before I could speak//
I was the greatest to rap, entrapped before weeks, but it was I that had, the greatest ever technique.. I managed to rap... without learning to breathe//

RIP to those who wont give the chance...

~fade~

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god damn....this was ill dun,seriously im likin it immensley...damn the shit was deep as fuck and well put together an all that good shit i can tbe bothered writing...i really liked it,deep as bottomless pits of abyss nahmean...shit dun...yay finally someone else on this board that isnt gangsta...*heart stop*....this was an ill drop skrypted...peep my shit some time eh,zions.....


A label attraction? When the fuck will it happen? Its too late for school, I can't dual with fractions//
^^^ hotttt argh hahah*head explode*.........niceness all round.


bismillah

lmao thanks... tho I dont feel it was near as well written as your making it out to be.

It was like.. I dunno, I told a friend I was gonna drop a quick key and 10 minutes later I checked the screen to see what I wrote... *shrugs*

Thanks.

nah seriously i liked it alot,i never ealized it was a key...my bad...bu tyeha i did like it alot..peep my zions verse dun...

bismillah

Aight.

yea, this drop was tight, you ahd good flow, was feelin it most fo the way through!

keep it up!

Thank you.