Yo Bash and tRilll thanks for keepin it critical with those replies.......I gotta a lot a work to do.........but I ain't goin no where!

Heroes to so many but they will forever be lost/
In life's labyrinth, but certainly not forgotten in thought/
So close to being on top that the skies opened up/
Snatched one after the other, leaving their families and stuff/
Hearts were bleedin, crying, grieving, definitely praying and such/
Had me misunderstanding to the fullest, no doubt believe I was touched/
Only the future makes you wonder what kind of cards you get dealt/
Fate fucking you over, or destiny royally flushing the wealth/
But these heroes remain in glory basically sacrificing them self/
Not questioning the heart of man in desperate need of some help/



..............it's short, my shit isn't together today.....what you think?

, ,, Make a longer drop ,, , , anywayz I think that this was actually a Tight piece , , ,Short but Tight , ,, you're improoving dawg ,,,, I liked tha whole concept of this drop ,, , , Simple but Tight , , ,, keep ur head up , ,and keep spittin dawg

Bash, you right definitely need a longer drop but instead of draggin that shit out and disrupting the simplicity i cut it .......good looks though

Syke

way too short but what was there was tight

too short but it was tight

.....all u have 2 do is keep workin cuzz.....shit u'll only get betta...it was a decent drop yo but make it longa....right when i started gettin in 2 it, it ended....jus keep practicin aight....peace bro.

`more detail is all i ask or can think of that'll make it longer and iller